This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

mimesis:ur verse was ok...but it was too streched...its like u were focused only on his name....ur punches aint that hard...and as for ur flow i give u a 5...structure was ok...but it think ya gtta work on that a lil more....and i didnt see any wordplay...how come?...ok verse tho

this battle stuff is fucked up yo.......i wanted to vote for raw...holy fuck.....

Voted For: Mimesis

mimenis you had good structure good vocab and aight punches...
raw killa..it werent that bad but it werent that good either..
mimenis7/10
raw6/10

Voted For: Mimesis

Mimesis-haha, very nice with the personals...I like how you got your structure set up and if you read it write the flow is on lock, good punches and wordplay, very nice overall battle

Raw killa-Lines stretched out every which way...self glorification....I dont see any posts or proof that Mimesis said he was a thug so that punch was worth nothing...no good punches, personals, multis or wordplay...elevate mos def

Vote-Mimesis for better personals, punches, and wordplay...