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come on ppl i vote on baTTLES
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Voted For: Quake
ite quake wins wit for good wordplay --Nah you watch 2 much TV espcially Oprah the way your battle record is Win~free (Winfrey)||.......... and Phatinum stepping to me will leave you shaking like a bobble~head|| ||Dawgs claims he hard but only if somehow he swollows~lead|| ..........good meta the first line, but u coulda worded the secound one better, but i knew what u were gettin at and thats decent wordplay ~~~~~~~ other cat yo im a tooth ache not your ordaniry milkshake now i battle till the earth quake look around .......an attempt at a personal, nice try but wasn't a punch when u did it, jus said his name randomly ~~~your stucture is way fucked up, we write in bars, other guys was stretched , but yours was jus fucked. work on personals and ya structure, read the league championship battle to get a better idea on how this is all done, both of you. return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138937 |
Voted For: Quake
multits came strong in this Verse, had a personality to it, had nice flow, long ass lines...but many landed punches. thats what counts, work on the structure hammie. Add a vote and im out. |
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Voted For: Quake
DAMN QUAKE.....WHOLE VERSE WAS SIKK......GOOD STRUCTURE......METAS OFF THA HOOK..||Plus you got 90 odds post and scared to battle cuz he scared that god would sin~me|| ||Nah you watch 2 much TV espcially Oprah the way your battle record is Win~free (Winfrey)||....THA LINE WAS CRAZY.....U GOT TALENT KIDD........PHATINUMS VERSE WAS GOOD BUT JUST TOO SIMPLE.......QUAKE RIPPED DIS DUDE.......SO VOTE GOES TO QUAKE.......RESPECT TO BOTH OF YA |
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