This was feedback posted for phatinum
 

i was gona vote but faginum you suck sit down comedian

This was feedback posted for phatinum
 

wack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

upp'in this so it can end already with decent explain votes...................

Voted For: intensify effect

fuck ,man!!!
do any of these kats know how to rhyme?!!!

too easy again...
phat:

1) structure sucked ass
2) first few lines didn't even rhyme
3) concepts... from every aspect... were trash and/or played
4) no wordplay, multi's, metas, vocab, personals or punches thrown

join up with boomer and elevate on all levels

IE:

again shyt rhymed and was better than the verse ya spit against boomer...

second bar was funny as shyt... good personal in bar four... coulda been reworded to hit harder

structure was ok... stretched at times

another easy win... challenge someone w/ more skills... uhh.. someone with ANY skills...

drop some honest votes on my battle against the great(not really) harvest crew... they tryna team up on me but fuck it... i'll kill 'em both

upp'in for more votes..................................

upp'in
this battle
ya..............................

Voted For: intensify effect

IE took it

punches- IE
flow- IE
structure-phatinum
creativity- IE.

jsut overall better puncehs by IE nice job...

return the vote on the Jono battle in my sig....

Voted For: intensify effect

Intensify came with good multis, aight structure, and some good punches - I like the finisher. Phatinum, keep workin' and you'll get better, and if you wanna battle again holla at me.
Vote - intensify effect

Return the favor, honest votes only:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142734

Voted For: intensify effect

phatinum
structure is decent.. u had one stretched line though.. flow fell off due to that stretched line.. ok multis.. no good wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

intensity effect
structure is ok.. u have quite a bit of stretched lines though.. decent multis.. wordplay is alright.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a decent structure.. both flows fell off.. both had decent multis.. neither had good personals.. intensity effect had the better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. intensity effect gets my vote..

VOTE - INTENSITY EFFECT

If you are able to post in elevated, please hit up the first link in my sig with an honest vote.. if not.. please hit up the second link in my sig with an honest vote..

Thanx.