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D-ICED 07-31-04 10:30 PM

This was feedback posted for phatinum
 
my rhymes are like fire your gonna get burned you are a fag coming out the closet im sucking your skills out like dracula.lol
hahahahahahahahdamn that was DIRT.think and get dont rhyme phat neither does sweater and you neither does annually and free.what you did a poem??!!!no personals no good bars or even decent ones and your flows and strutures were even still while mc 7 had a bad verse phat had a worse one so the vote goes to mc

Also Known. 08-01-04 04:34 AM

Voted For: EmerginMc07

good job kid you got this, phatinum your lines were stretched and didnt make sense your structure was whack and you werent funny if you tried to be funny you failed good job you sit down comedian. emergin you had me weak with this line "u like a fag bank evry1's made a deposit," even my friend who hates rap laughed at it so you did real well there is room for elevating with both ya especiay crapinum oh sorry fagnum oh shit the buttons are broken whackinum oh fuck i give up you sit down comedian

v/emerginmc07

ill bing aka U.G 08-01-04 04:38 AM

Voted For: EmerginMc07

your flow waws better and your shits fesh ph was iiaght but you got him due battle me next

Also Known. 08-01-04 04:41 AM

hey faginum if you got beef we can settle it set up a battle and i'll beat ya down you'll be another loser in my sig

7*0*8* 08-01-04 04:57 AM

Voted For: phatinum

phatinum took dis one easy.... no offence but EM ur verse had 2 much repitition in it.... u said word like 4 times and u said fag 3 times... and PH had betta flow and punches an wordplay so he wins....

vote/PH

yo like u said u gnna return da favor i know i aint vote 4 u but dat doesn't meanur gonna DR r u? anyway jus elvate kid and u'll do fine... not so bad4 a second battle....

7*0*8* 08-01-04 04:58 AM

yo heres the link... plz vote on dis iight?

ILL

Implicit 08-01-04 05:00 AM

Voted For: EmerginMc07

ok this battle was really weak. not really any personals or punches. the gay joke, tha joke about the bank were kinda weak but those were probly tha best attempts at punches in this battle. phatinum u gotta come up with better disses and work on ur flow cause i was havin trouble readin it


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