Voted For: Triple_N

damn this was hard both were nice...

both had good story lines
imagery has a tie too
it was pretty much close the only thing it comes down
to is which one i like more

Q- nice story, vocab could of been better , but you
still had nice imagery, had me reading the whole way

Triple- agian another nice story and yours also had me
reading all the way nice imagery better vocab

this is close by triple n edged this

v/triple n

Voted For: Tha Q

i liked this verse way better... vote q.....the imagry the characters thought process and the end was all good...the end show mass creativity...big up to both yall but unfourtunatly somebody gotta lose vote/ tha q

Voted For: Triple_N

ok triple urs was more realistic lol
q work on vocab triple had better vocab but im givin it to triple for a more realistic verse ya feel me no hate thouhg both had gret flow triple wprk on the structure dawg besides that it was a great verse

Voted For: Triple_N

i think ya verse was betta becuz ya had betta creatitivy..dont get me wrong both verse was creative but i think yours was more realistic to me........triple n had betta wordplay too.......dats why triple n gets my vote

if i could vote i would.......... but both yall did ur things.......... hey and spread the love man to my battle.....

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Voted For: Triple_N

damn nice shit,but this is one sided

the-q ur verse was ok,i mean there was ok imagery ,no emotion at all in my opinion it was wasnt a good read without emotion sorry elevate

triple-n ur vers was pretty nice man u had nice complexity and metaphors,the imagery seemed okay,and u had quite good emotion in this,good job u get my vote

v/triple n

^^^ LMAO @ these "votes"...no emotion? hahaaa

ok kiddo...


w/e

uppin

uppin for honest explained votyes...holla back y'all

Voted For: Triple_N

dayum

triple N: that was a short structure but your verse was ILL...dayum..your very creative with that shit...your vocab was ill..your imaginary..i culd picture every last word.....your flow was great too..this was a great verse from you...keep it up..

tha q your shit was sick too.......but u lakced great vocab and wordplay..and sum things i culdnt picture..and the beginning i was like..wtf lol..and if u saw the shadow of the kat..how the hell did it look like a person to u....see a giant cat's shadow...dont look like no human too me lol

vote triple N

rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138871