Voted For: ATMOSPHERE

VOte ATMOS

After hearin how bad u spit?shyt you'd might as well be put in shackles...(line 5)
The proof is ur record, (31-16) you only win one out of every two battles...(Line 6)
That won the battle right there, DOPE LINE

Marvs first line was Ok but then it got wack and cheesy,
overall OK battle,

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

Oh shit dat joint was hot.Dis dudes a comedian. Marv had dat shit but it was close though. Atmosphere you did aiight but youngin came wit dat shit.Personals Marv had it wit dat atmos fear line. Same for personalz...dog you aint have any.Punclinez Marv(both was good though)funny as shit.Structure Atmosphere. Overall feelin both but Marv had it...no hate. Vote Marvelousj.

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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

Flow: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Structure: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Punches: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Metas: TIE
Personalz: ATMOSPHERE
Creativity: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Multiez: none
Enjoyment: MARVOLoUsJ1009

VOTE: MARVOLoUsJ1009

Pretty easy battle to vote on...

ATMOSPHERE your flow was off... punches payed and shit...
thas y u didnt get my vote...

elevate ppl...

okay goodlookin on da votes ppl...uppin 4 more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Stop Sleepin Ppl...................

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

shit ppl it aint hard da tell a record & name like mine had da attract dis quer // had da really think about battlin rite?? marvjay is dat nigga dat "atmos-fear"-
^^ nice wordplay-personal
might shyne but dat'z only when marv's done,i call her up n homie da broad come // even "cam" madd cuzz i stay with "pink" on me but umm datz only ya moms "tongue"-
^^filler,but still nice
but how can u say i aint sick as you??,on rv top 10 nobody eva mention's you // u not nice rv.com i dont know whut it is but dis "dick" only "cums" "(tip) ical"-
^^??was'nt feeling this bad rhyme
i think u should get banned n more if i aint da sickest on da site whut u panic 4? // like "nail shops" if u spit at a dude with "aids" trust me u would give da "man-a-cure"-
^^koo closer nice wordplay

If bein a vet means you hot then you should be put in a well...(line 1)
cuz you don't spit fire or flames, jst u thinkin u do is funny as hell...(line 2)
^^ok nothin special
Dis nigga, could spit? yo ppl dat you betta neva believe...(line 3)
So Marv be mah advil, don't spit for RV's very own relief...(line 4)
^^pushed rhyme,weak punch..
After hearin how bad u spit?shyt you'd might as well be put in shackles...(line 5)
The proof is ur record, (31-16) you only win one out of every two battles...(Line 6)
^^do your math again ..that don't add up
Shyt, so please leave, ur hated, we don't want you at all marvolous...(line 7)
If u were jesus n rhymin good would save our souls?---
shyt, cuz of you, the devil wouldn't be hard to trust...(line 8)
^^bad closer did'nt even rhyme...

marv took this cause of punches both had some probs in their verse but marv had the punches n flow overall...
atmos if he has a record of 31/16..hes had 47 battles ,so 1 outta 2 battles would put his wins at 23/24...i think you jus got confuzed....
return the favour /else i won't vote on ya battles anymore...
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