anyways for others who are not drs or haters my topic is on hip-hop but i guess little kids cant understand it so im upping for honest intelligent voters

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Again... he talked about hip-hop the entire time... think outside the box... it's called imagination... if ya use that maybe you can see a grownup veiw of how hip-hop is seen to people who live it and not just do it as a hobby.

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This was feedback posted for caliph
 

lol...just wanted to see how my fellow crew member is doing in this battle...i aint voted for no one, or feedn bac, so dont bitch

Voted For: For$akeN

i was really feeling your verse forsaken i was surprised i didnt think you was this good in topicals...the vocab was sick good wordplay and structure everything was intact...and flowed together well...wasnt much imagery but everything else made up for it you wrote about the topic and didnt write a story for the topic thats what i like.....

claiph your structure was choppy flow was a lil off track but besides that you had a decent drop also you stayed on topic most of the way through...you more of wrote a story instead of describing hip hop

both verses were good but i gotta go with forsaken..good battle....caliph work on your structure and your topicals will be better

vote/ forsaken

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