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~Luciano~ 08-07-04 04:45 PM

Voted For: Lil-trip

Ima have 2 go wit lil trip on this one for better wordplay
and overall harder punches
Atmosphere had a nice drop but his punches
were not hittin nearly as hard as trips
it was a good battle but it came down 2 wordplay
structure and vocab and i felt that went 2 Trip

HoPe 08-08-04 01:42 PM

wtF??there arn't even ne punches in dis battle cuz its a topical stupid ass

TURBAN 08-08-04 02:22 PM

Voted For: Lil-trip

lil trip got this one , uhh i didnt get wut atmosphere was doing , nice rhyme style but i'd go with lil trip mainly because he had the best word play structure was a little off but for the most visual effect lil flip takes it

HoPe 08-10-04 03:36 PM

uppin

HoPe 08-12-04 09:16 PM

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

Triple_N 08-14-04 02:15 PM

Voted For: ATMOSPHERE


Not the greatest topicals........

Lil trip....your story's imagery wasn't good and the biggest thing in a topical is imagery the way you worded it made it difficult to picture, you flow was alil off and I don't know what that was before the verse just don't do it again

INgenis........Somewhat better than his in imagery but was still kinda lagging, flow was tight throughout, well structured as well and it had decent emotion so you pretty much took this

Vote: Ingenius

Percept Shun 08-14-04 05:26 PM

Voted For: ATMOSPHERE

both of you were iight
Atno: damn you was nice in ya topic and you stayed on it very well props girl
Lil: um you was iiight but you neeed to elevate

i dont think topics are for you lil trip

VOte atmo

HoPe 08-15-04 04:37 AM

uppin

HoPe 08-15-04 10:06 AM

upiin

HoPe 08-15-04 04:26 PM

uppin

HoPe 08-15-04 08:36 PM

upvv upvv upvv upvv

fluidmoon 08-15-04 09:22 PM

Voted For: Lil-trip

ok:
lil~trip: this was a damn good verse man, you set the secen up and everything, i liked ya flow and structure,nice rhyme scheme, and the whole verse was on point from beginning till the end, overall nice job both but i think ingenius' verse wasnt that strong here, at least not as strong as lil's verse.....
vote:lil

Desipher 08-15-04 09:51 PM

This was feedback posted for ATMOSPHERE
 
vote on da prodigy vs dustyblunted an i'll return tha fav

HoPe 08-16-04 03:49 AM

up up and awaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay

Desipher 08-16-04 10:36 AM

gota give this 2 atnospere..he just had a better overall flow


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