been sleepin for awhile....uppin..................

Voted For: Justify

Justify
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

Khaos
Punches were good too not as hard as Justify's tho...
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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Uppin...Quit sleepin on this....damn kid..........

Voted For: Justify

you DEFINATLY took this.. i liked most of your lines.. tried on the personals

khaos your opener didnt rhyme, didnt make much since. your punches, didnt rhyme. and some rhymed but crappy rhyme -raps,wack' ? I liked how you punched hard though

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Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

close to call, justify cooked up a storm but da_renegade took it.
Flow was better, punchlines better. Cant say a lot else

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Voted For: Justify

not a real good battle IMO...

Jus, ya verse was okay...but it definitely could use some improvements...structure was on point tho...didnt really see any personals...punches were decent but real basic, nothin outstandin...but u had some real decent vocab...overall u had good consistency...

Khaos, ya verse was aight too, but coulda used some improvements also...structure wasnt bad...i saw a personal attempt wit the nameplay, but it was weak...u had the same deal wit Justify punch-wise, nothin real outstandin...overall, u started off weak, but then u got a lil better in the middle...anyways,

V/ Justify by a hair...i felt he was more consistent...just my honest opinion...

Voted For: Justify

Khaos_daRenegade:
alright verse bad punches didnt hit that hard...vocabulary weak...metas pretty good...no real hard hitting wordplay...didnt real come that hard...all around kinda a big time ass kicking you got lol sry to say...

Justify:
alright verse nice punches...came pretty hard with stucture and flow...vocaulary came pretty tight to...all around ass kicking you gave him lol...good verse nuff said...

vote: Justify

Voted For: Justify

votes here:

ya structure took this, ya had the correct line stretch that made ya punches land nicely, ya personals i didnt get, but no one really takes the time to check links any more, thats my pointer. ya had a good closure, and a nice opener.

best lines:
Cuz your flows wack, and you write in a fuckin paragraph
You just joined and already startin down the wrong path

^^nice bar, ya came hard here. nice job overall.
ya had the win b/c ya structure landed ya punches nicely. hot verse. work on comdey lines, word.

vote: justify.

feedback for Khaos: ya lost.

Voted For: Justify

Justify: good wordplay...good structure...good punches...good flow...it could have been betta...but it was way betta than his shit...

KD: wut r u thinking elavate man...think about if u got somethin to rhyme with before u write it...god damn...???...

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Voted For: Justify

I'd say justify took this battle with ease....

khao's verse was horrible..........punches don't seem to hit, got a screwed up structure, flow was too short and choppy towards the end...

justify got nice flow and structure, and decent and wayyyyy more harderhitting punches

so overall, my votes goes to justify