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i hope these arent dick riders homie cuz i had mor punches,multi's n metas than u did
if u peeps cant read my verses u need contacts or glasses one of da 2.... im in anotha site dats outta da top 50 best rap sites in da world.....been there 4days n im already a moderator n leader of my own crew plus niggaz feelin me so ya'll jus...i dunno uppin dis bitch for honest votes NO HATIN OR DICK RIDIN VOTES |
Voted For: raw killa
yo i think raw got this cos i honestly think he had laods of multies and had harder punches...Gladiator...hating dosent rhyme with satan..not that much that was a gd personal but not tight...both had a tight structure but as raw had laods of multies that gives him a plus...props to both & this battle was a tie... |
Voted For: raw killa
good ..good its flow is perfect everything is good. |
thanx 4 da honest votes rv keep'em comin dis shit is a close battle good luck homie peace uppin dis shit
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the battle was at its most with raw cause he had a good openin and grat endin and he had more power to his words that i could see. :thumbup:
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okay dude stop swyin votes n shyt
i mean how u goona xplain while their voting and shyt XXX u dint read it right it says HATIN-SATAN which rhymes just fine (hay-tin/say-tin) damn |
Voted For: LyrikalGladiator
lyrikal got this with better punches n way betta structure n flow...//this has ta go though,da slash is annoyin as hell... raw killa...weak verse,seriously you need ta get betta format in ya verse..you stretch your lines way 2 long n some of it is jus garbage"no punch"n this aint a hate vote,so don't take it like that you jus got beat by a better verse.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054 |
i have a hard tyme ta believe that
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^^all your lines were stretched ta shit.....get me the link of this other site i wanna see you as a mod n leader"seriously"get me the link....prove you aint bullshittin... |
Voted For: LyrikalGladiator
LyrikalGladiator dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is alright, i dont know why u switched it up at the end.. flow fell off a little due to the switch.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty dope.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personal.. raw killa structure is ass.. all of ur lines are stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchnes.. tight multis.. wordplay is decent.. some of ur punches connected.. no good personals... Overall raw killa had more multis.. neither had a good flow.. LyrikalGladiator had the better overall structure.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. LyrikalGladiator gets my vote.. VOTE - LYRIKALGLADIATOR |
lol better personals now i kno these r hate votes bitches dis nigga didnt have one personal on me fuckin ass wipes n my lines arent stretched either pussies quit ya fuckin hatin da link 2 da site is http://s3.-----------------/rapaddiction/index.php
hope ur faggots enjoyin ridin each other fuckin homo's im through dis sry faggot ass site niggaz here do nuttin but front,act tough n hate cuz sum1 betta than dem pussies uppin dis bitch 4 1 MORE FUCKIN HONEST NONE HATIN DICK RIDIN NONE CREW VOTE if u n e of those n i catch u im havin dis battle dq'd 4 breakin da rules peace |
Voted For: raw killa
raw had some good wordplay and creativity...especialy towards da end. lyrikal needed better structure... but his got better near the end too...overall though, raw's verse won Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
its been like 2-4 days since dis battle was won by me how da fuck it opened back up again wit 2 of my votes dq'd? yo dis site be on sum hatin shit fo reals ayt peeps honest votes no hatin or dick ridin n certainly no crew votes or bribe votes peace
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Voted For: raw killa
raw killa he had betta punches and ohters. personals raw multis raw structure raw punches raw flow raw vocab raw word play raw overall raw |
ty sum1 who understood my verse thanx 4 da vote holla back people jus 1 more so dis retarded battle will b closed peace ill return da favor wit honest votes 1 luv
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Voted For: raw killa
raw killa took it punches.personals.metas.vocab he won this str8 out elevate a lil bil lg but good job keep going |
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