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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

imma start with I.E., wackest i ever seen you come...wow!!!, your flow was not on point, it wasnt handlin, and choppy with messed up structure*elevate*...on the positive note, besides all the mess up's, you had a couple good punches, and rhymes in your flow, but i think there were too many predictable lines, and thats wat did it for you, too easy

manipulation: nice flow, nice structure, and you had some good punches and multies in there that i seen, *good shit*, you need to work on your rhyming also, the only difference about your and his, is that your was clever, and you worded it right...*elevate on that*, lookn at the end of each line, the last words are similiar, that could hurt u in other battles, but *good flow*

overall: ya'll both need to elevate...work on your rhymings, and stick to your points, to many *personal* changes could hurt you

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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

dis to me was a close battle, ut maniuplation wun dis one, he had better flow, structure, no streched lines and all dat other shyt

vote: dis guy

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Voted For: intensify effect

yo i dont like intensify but yo son he def got this win hes punches and flow is what did it MAN u did ya thing but i thought intensify just drop harder

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

ok:
manipulation; ya verse was good,nice flow and structure, ya wordplay is good here too, i liked ya opening bar,and i thought the chrome line was clever, nice job...
intensify:ya verse was good too, but ya structure was off a bit tho which made it not flow right, but overall was an ok verse, both had good punches, but ima have to give this to :
manipulation~because of flow and harder punches

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Manip won this with better punches. I liked the one line "Only time you see chrome is on a passin' car". Both had good structure and style though, yet intensify's verse sounded like he was battling a man. Well, he was sorta...Man-ipulation, haha. Anyway, this was a close one, but keep doin' ya thing. Manip, holla at ya boy for a collab sometime...
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