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sorry for this post, link didn't show up for some reason on last post...this is just a punchline battle could you guys please drop an honest vote on it....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140992 |
Voted For: Triple_N
Vote-Triple N u had punches dat really did damage to shabba...u lacked in personals but u booth great......Shabba u wuz missing personals n ur punches were weak Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^^^hate.
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D-Blue..that is a hate vote man, i saw the cheating thread
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Voted For: Shabba Ranks
open- Triple N close- Shabba Ranks personals- Shabba Ranks metas- Triple N punches- Triple N multis- Shabba Ranks win- Triple N I liked his verse better especially the pepto bismol line. his verse was more interesting to me. no love lost for the 2 of you tho Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
okay dont pay attention to that post above me. especially who they think i voted for, my vote is for triple n. triple n has my vote!
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Voted For: Triple_N
Ya garbage and whats worse is u didn't write dat So u can't fight back, cuz you also bite wack ^DECENT OPENER Ya only chance to be best is to travel thru time To rv 100 years from now when there are no opposin' rhymes ^OK COULD'VE BEEN WRITTEN CLEANER You'll be here all alone still doing ya shitty spittin' Foreva losin' cuz our obituaries will still be betta written ^DECENT PUNCH Ya rhymes rightful place is in bedpans and bathroom stalls Shabba Ranks new theme song is Hey!! peptobismol ^NICE..FUNNY PUNCH Your a fakin' jamaican that can be taken anyday Only way u jamaican is if ya 1st name's ray and last is gay(reggae) ^OK PERSONAL So your wack and an exposed phony u must be hexed Cuz u could be board of ed and still not distribute quality text ^^OK..CLOSER NOTHIN SPECIAL Just checkin in i beat you, look how fast it took me... Dude is a Bisexual Escort, but still cant get no pussy... ^NICE FLOW..OK PUNCH This kids soft, ill give him a punch to his gut and puncture his insides... And i wouldnt be his friend online...cuz he Literally Dickrides*... ^DECENT PUNCH You not on my level, so you better proceed with caution... I run through kids like you, and raise the bar like polevaulting... ^WAS'NT FEELING THIS..POOR RHYME This dudes a bitch, Ill hand him a loss, then ill hand em some clips... And when he got cum on his lips, is the only time he talkin slick... ^^OK CLOSER..COULD'VE BEEN BETTER overall im gonna go with triple n on this his punches connected better but some lines you played in both verses it would've been better if both had dropped the same amount of bars.........decent battle but it seemed like both came fairly weak......... return the vote.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054 |
Voted For: Shabba Ranks
this battle was okay, i guess.. structure - tie wordplay - toss up punches - shabba personals - shabba overall - shabba to me, shabba barley took this.. triple N, you verse was coo, your opener was alright but you started to drift off from there and go down hill.. your wordpla could of been better and none of your punches hit.. the one about ray gay was ok i guess, i just wasn't feeling it.. Shabba ranks you won basically coz of better lines. you both had the same stucture and rhymes so it came down to punchlines and i think that you got the better of him in that.. so I vote for Shabba Ranks.. Keep it gangsta and return the favor in my thread with an honest drop will you? thanx, heres the link.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352 |
Uppin for some honest non hate^^ votes on this battle
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...............^^^ill get to them links............
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Voted For: Triple_N
^ur best lines were (Triple N) were: Ya only chance to be best is to travel thru time To rv 100 years from now when there are no opposin' rhymes ^ lmfao, altogether u had a nice structure and good flow plus every bar rhymed perfectly.. and u took the closer with: So your wack and an exposed phony u must be hexed Cuz u could be board of ed and still not distribute quality text ^really nice way to end the battle, good job! Shabba Ranks- ur verse was good with punches, especially the opener: Just checkin in i beat you, look how fast it took me... Dude is a Bisexual Escort, but still cant get no pussy... ^nice punch to start off, you have nice multis throughout but some of your lines were stretched when u tried to make them rhyme.. and sumtimes they were stretched without rhymin'.. so with that feedback i give the win to: Triple N keepin' it consistent throughout, nice quick battle y'all.. peep my links aight, ~wun~ |
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