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Katastrofe 08-08-04 03:49 PM

Voted For: Sinner

Nice flow....like the lil multis you threw in ther...fell me. but yeah your delivery was better nah mean? Holla baq.

Effect 08-08-04 04:40 PM

upping fot votes..................................

Recluse 08-08-04 04:42 PM

Voted For: Sinner

this was one sided battle not really that much punches for either emcee but sinner took this.....with better personals

MagiC 08-08-04 04:51 PM

Voted For: MC RaBbIt

Rabbit you come nice, when I saw the name I thought
you was ganna be wack but you got skillz Gurl, The
punchs hit hard and the flow was tight. Also the vocab
was ill.

Sinner I expected more from you man, all the training
I gave you. Your still not rhyming son. Nice vocab but
the punches didn't really hit hard coz I couldn't feel the
flow. Stay up man and keep working...

Vote ~ MC Rabbit

Effect 08-09-04 07:01 AM

I had alot of multies though upping...............

Definate Fully 08-09-04 07:21 AM

Voted For: MC RaBbIt


mc rabbits a crack whore addict... the bitch is a fuckin faggot
you just got ya name from 8mile he gets pissed n can't take it
didnt rhyme to me
the bitch thinks he's ruthless I punch him n make him toothless
whos da duffus you just plain stupid and he thinks he's blessed
dont get the rhyming
I don't wanna be messed........ i'll have you hanged and drawn
fucking torcher you to death..... n smash ur head wid a acorn
better
i'm from england now welcolm .......to beef land i spit n u ran
i'll destroy your beef plans and chop... you up like food spam
decent
bet you have no multies........ and if you did they'd be oldies
ones that have been played and yours would gone off moldie
good
Your punches are gonna be BOREDOME no votes r gonna come
not for you or maby just a few cause all ya come backs r DUM
nice
your nothing but a shit spitter dats gone off and looks bitter
when you tried fuckin ur bitch havin sex you dind't hit her lol
lol nice line
your corny ass is stupid im wasteing twenty lines for ya mind
at birth when u was born u shot out of ya mothers.... behind
LOL HAHAHAH!!!
your lyrics couldn't effect me........ cause u can't rap cleverly
you get energy burning you up and i'll destroy... ur personality
dont get the rhyming
last bar this took me quite a while now i g2 wait for ur shit pile
or maby you think twice and give this up.... and run 100 miles
nice closer

total:55/100

i got myself a battle with a real ass "sinner"
im a noob, and i'll still eat him for dinner,
i seen this line before
if you accept this battle, you must be very brave,
coz at the end of this, you'll be my slave,
good
yow not an emcee, you just a little punk,
i guess you think your a bit of a "hunk", but tha girls still reject you when they're drunk !,
second line too stretched
but that won't bother you, coz you like dick,
you should put down the mic, and suk ya dad off, til his dick is sick !*
nice
when it comes to blow jobs, thats where you're a pro,
you really know how to make cock juices flow !,
sounds like your gay
just give up rap, and become a gay male slut,
if you save your money, you can buy yourself a gay love hut,
no comment
coz doing this would be keepin' up your families reputation,
and surely, for you, thats a big enough temptation,
nice
lets compare that life to your current rapping career,
in this your going nowhere, your status will never get past volunteer,
nice
but if you chose the life of a full-time queer,
you'd be amazing, you might even become a broken dick engineer !
lol
ok, so lets get this shit into the open, so that it's clear,
after i beat you, you fuk off, and become a gay peoples pioneer !
nice closer

total: 60/100

okay this was close but i think Mc Rabbit got this with better flow and i liked the rhymes n punches hit harder in my opinion
Sinner-yours was good but i dont understand some lines cause i dont think they rhyme

nice battle but Mc R gots it

Vote in return both of you in my sig with me VERSUS afro

aiiight

Effect 08-09-04 10:38 AM

upping for votes..................................

Effect 08-09-04 01:46 PM

upping for votes..................................

Reflect 08-09-04 03:55 PM

uppin

Triple_N 08-09-04 04:25 PM

Voted For: Sinner

Ok sinner.........your verse had very effective multies, solid punches that were kinda weak but still effective, structure was tight and flow was on point

Mc rabbit...your flow was ok but your structure was bad and punches was weak, u gotta elevate dawg


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