Voted For: J_Trooper

troop came harder....had more flow...multies...word play...was jus overall better...headgames...u had some good lines...but it didnt all make sense...it was all about u really...eleveate more...vote trooper

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: J_Trooper

hot battle...troop got it from the begining to the end, his flow was all around better...i like his style and structure of the flow...altho some rhymes were on the verge of not making since, but u keep it hot, i like that...elevate more, this wasnt your best proformance

headgames: u started off coo in the begining but drifted off your point nearr the end, and i think that hurted you...u gotta keep your flow and run wit it, but u got caught, and troop passed you up...big ups tho, i thought u were gun come weak, but u proved me wrong, i like that...elevate more to get on troops level.

overall: headgames keep practicing, then challenge yourself...troop, get out of front lines, i think you good enough for elevated frontlines...your record aint that precious, keep on doing ya'll thang

i'm still uppin four some votes, aight holla back

Voted For: J_Trooper

I wish I knew who Lieza Menelly was.....you prob would of got even more props...nah mean. But overall you got him...ya flow as on point...punches hit, had a few multis, but the personals were ......well....not there. But his wack herb flow got merked...he sounded like Dr. suess gone bad..nah mean? Return the fav.

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I hate it when peeps do that, my explaination was coo enough, but J-trooper, i'm about to explain better, just tell strobe that i gave another explanation and to recount my vote..

Headgames
First Bar: Easy rhyme scheme and played punchline.. not inpressed
2nd: Again, punch was basic, dr. Suess rhymes.. Lube and Smooth..
easy to come up with
3rd.. whack.. no punch at all, whac wordplay..
4th. whack, no punchlines.. you barley insulted him..
5th.. the close was a mediocre punch, alright set up.. over all the verse gets 6/10.. you lacked in wordplay, punches and creativity..

Trooper:
1rst: Mediocre punch, nice flow and wording..
2nd:first line, coo diss for a set up for a nice punch
3rd. nice punchline about gift, i get it too..
4th: nice word play, good meta at the end..
5th: nice set up diss, you mensioned his name atleast, than you KOed him weith a punch..

overall 7.5/10


Trooper you won this with better wordplay, nice stucture and better disses,, headgames lacked in every department and you honestly won, so tell Strobe to recount my vote..

Do me a favor and return favor with a drop in my thread cuz, thanx, one.. heres the link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

Ayo cuz, see if you can return the favor and drop in this one, coz peeps keep on complaining about hoe they can't vote or whatever. but check it out for me cuzo, thanx. heres the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

I'm still uppin for some votes, this shits gonna be up here for 2 weeks at the rate were goin

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uppin 4 votes

This was feedback posted for headgames
 

decent battle can't vote but you both did good...im in ya'll crew so thats why i can't vote

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Voted For: J_Trooper

Aight i think troop got this.

Headgames = Your structure was pretty bad.. some pretty stretched lines.. you had alright flow though.. i wasnt feeling any of your punches tho not too good...

Troop = you had better structure.. better punches.. flow was alright.. some of ur lines were dope while others seemed like filler.. but all in all they contributed to your verse

Overall Vote Troop

Voted For: J_Trooper

return da favor and hit dis up
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136356

J_Trooper took dis one
He had some good punch lines and I liked his structure
He had metas and over all hurt his feelins
Headgames ur rhyme was ok
Troopers was just better
U barely had any punch line and ur rhymes were all over da place
v/J_Trooper
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