This was feedback posted for BANG
 

Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it

uppin..............

Voted For: BANG

Ok, I say BANG took this one. Honestly, you both need a little work on your structure and punches, yet BANG had a better rhyme style and it just flowed better. No hate though, good battle you 2.

Return the favor y'all. Honest votes only.
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Voted For: BANG

yo dis goes to bang, i mean reloaded wat was da name thing bout bart n shit?, dat was whack, but otha then that it was alll good i guess, but i have to say Bang took it from vocab to wordplay, man evrythin went to bang,

v/bang

return da favor
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uppin......

Uppin for votes aight lets get this done.

This cat must have the fuckin wackest verse on this site. Yall lets be serious.

This was feedback posted for Reloaded
 

man, try and sort your structure out a bit, coz you made it hard to read like that. try an use better vocab as well. bang, vocab was really, really simple. up your vocab and elevate both of ya. no beef.

Voted For: BANG

Aight there were not Really very Meny Punches From Both of yah, But BAng Took the Punches categorie, Reloaded yo your Structure was wacked, whats with the PAragraph Shit, yah Flow was aight though.!!! But Overall My verse is handed out to BAng, Just Cause he Had a Little Bit Stronger Punches, and his Structure was betta!!! No Hate!!


Return The Fav on one of my battles, In my Sig.. !!!!!!!

Voted For: BANG

lol..bang killed u on dis one..basicly..plz have better structure... and don't stretch ur lines.. also work on ur punches..