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50Cal. 08-11-04 12:31 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Empire
big ok verse no real punches and some of it aint rhyme good flow and vocab was ok2/10.monsoon good vocab and wordplay on this good ending and a few good punches you gave good drop 5/10

i vote for monsoon nobody can post a vote on this fix it noone has unlimited posts except maybe strobe

B-MAC 08-11-04 01:07 PM

This was feedback posted for MONSOON
 
Yo i tryed to Vote But it said i Need Unlim Posts.. not sure what that meant,

But Monsoon had this battle wit better punches, and Vocab, Rhymes could use a bit of work but overall pretty good verse,
Big Tissle, yah gotta work on yah Punches to make them harder, and more effective..

B-MAC 08-11-04 01:09 PM

Yo you gotta get a Mod in here, to Fix this up, they will put the Votes to the Respected person, if yah tell themm !!!!!!!!!

MONSOON 08-12-04 01:28 AM

i got good feed back but no votes, i swear I must be the bad guy here........

Youngin 08-12-04 04:34 PM

This was feedback posted for MONSOON
 
Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it


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