Voted For: $LXDiesel

MC RAPPER
Where you at? Flippin jobs, playin car notes?
While I’m swimmin’ in ya women like the breast stroke
BLAH.4/10
Right stroke, left stroke what’s the best stroke
Death stroke tongue all down her throat
HMMMM 3/10
Nuthin’ left to do but send her home to you
I’m through can ya sing the song for me, boo?
AGAIN..3/10
She’s sick of that song on how it’s so long
Thought he worked his until I handled my biz
2/10....DNT RHYME
There I is major pain like Damon Wayans
Low down dirty even like his brother Keenan
BLAH.....3/10
Schemin don’t bring your girl ‘round me
True player for real, ask Puff Daddy
2/10 AWFULL
OVERALL.17/60...(GENEROUSLY)...only thing woz ok woz flow/structure.
no punches at all...no personals...didnt make sense.

LXDIESEL
MC Wrapper wheres dat from wrappin whoppers and burger king?
None the less ill crump and throw u cuz you aint a thing
4/10..no
I ma shyne right now, light this bitch on fire
You aint gonn do nuttin u confused transvestite liar
3/10..weak
Wut ya gonna do are ya gonna wrap me up boy???
Before dat, mature up, throw away ur sex toy
4/10...PLAYED
Ya playin in da majors aint no shit here
I ma take a bite soon as i smell fear
2/10....filler
My verse goes for da back bone makin ya all cripple
Saw ya in a movie once called dr. DO Little
5/10.AN ATTEMPTED PUNCH..cudve bin aiight wit beta set-up
Aint nothing i aint seen livin here in cali
We are hittin hard here harder then Somalia
2/10..back to filler
Ma lyrics are a 12 gage urs are broke ass switch blade
This aint a challenge this is fuckin rhyme raid
4/10..bit beta
Thinkin ya gonna rise up, you aint first one homie
Just step off, if u win, ill come back u dummie
3/10.no

overall 27/80.
verse a lil harder hittin than ur opponent(not by much)....
wrk on structure,flow wasnt 2 bad...up ya metas wordplay...
both yall elevate...
no hate..return tha fav.

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Dis battle was good
the only problem is that I cant vote yet
Ill be sure to vote on dis one

uppin for some more votes ^^^^^ technically one more vote for me to merk him but ppl give an honest bote and ill return the favor

uppin for some more votes ^^^^^ technically one more vote for me to merk him but ppl give an honest bote and ill return the favor
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Voted For: $LXDiesel

yo dis batle was close as fuck but i gota say that diesal took it but it was really fukin close, from his unches n wrodplay and he had mad vocab, so this goes to him, Mc cmon dawwwg u can do way beta den that, i seen it,
iite 1 love

v/Diesal,
yall retrun da favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142129,
and the ones down there