u frst
wer here or u made anotha?

k the first guy took it to you hard heres what i give him
flow:6/10
Punches:7/10
Wordplay:6/10

and diesel i give you
flow:3/10
punches:6/10
wordplay:4/10

hey beatbringer is yer this hardcore nigga like you say you are you should rap like one then you keep changing yer story line and shit the other guy diddent but i gave it to you because of wordplay and flow you should rap gangsta and you should wright about yer life if its hard down thur in the west homes ight now thats the future for ya brother para straight canadian westsider from where the wanna be natives are and man we smoke up down hur we legalized pot im a straight dope smoker ight holla peace thats my word!

man, i aint mad at ya for not givin it to me, i wus writin sumtin bettar at dat time and just didnt wanna waste ma time, and when your homie gets shot lets see how your writing will feel.

HAHA SLX U BITCH NO 1 GOT SHOT AND U WER TRYIN U FUKIN TOLD ME HAHA
well dont rly care cause i was jus foolin around well peace

and thnx man da dude dat voted for meh holla back peace

ight ya man you were pritty good you should join the p.s.a its pimped you could get in easy with that shit

ight check my shit out its dope shit lol.

lol give me a link or sumthin ( 2 ur shit) and yah i mite think bout joinin
Thnx

more ppl c'mon give a coment :laugh: