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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
ice pick structure was nasty lol but aneway im callin both ya'll dudes out lets go
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This was feedback posted for J DOT
Damn i liked both ya verses
i gotta get off, but ill do a breakdown later so ill upp it for u at least |
uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....
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uppin'..........the vote people, not asking for much
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Ice Pick you took this with complexity and multies...I didn't get everything like your wordplays but your punches definitely hit much harder than his. I liked these lines somebody Told-U-Wrong..U can's spit wit 'ICE..ya' Breathing'z Fatigued 9 BATTLEZ..6 of 'em loss's??..Dot thinks he is Leadin-da-League on ya' forehead CONCUSIONZ "project" visualz dat Must-be-STARZ DOTS a Primate..but i agilely "flip" on his Monkey Barz leavin' Flunkiez Scarred..ya' "dissected" TRACKZ??..i RAN-thru-in-SECTIONZ like "crazed" PROCTOLOGISTZ..ICE will HANNed-U-ya- RECTUM...... You got the win because you were more complex, deeper meaning behind each bar, but you gotta work on the consistency in ur flow. pz |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
ok j dot ok punches but they came too weak you had a good flow and decent disses4/10 icepick good vocab and flow your struture needs work but you had some hard hitting bars here but your ending was weak still your punches win this for you they was strong as fuck |
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