aight apriciate the feed back, ima keep elvatin. PEACE ^^^^^^^^^^UPPIN

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin this bitch

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Uppin This bitch

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up up and awaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy!... now can we finish this up people? thanx in advance

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

opener - Diesel, Ill's wasnt that good
closer - Ill, was way better
punches - Ill, were a lot harder
personals - Neither, neither had any I was feelin
multis - Ill, had a lot
metas - Ill, also had a lot
vocab - Ill, very good vocab man
structure - Tie, both were good

Ill: your takin this one man, I just didnt really like the opener as much, and you didnt have any strong personals. Elevate in those areas and you should be all good...

Diesel: I just didnt really like your overall verse in my honest opinion because it seemed like it was the kinda rhyme that you coulda used against any cats on here ya know...you had no personals and I didnt really see any original stuff in there, it was all played...better luck next time I guess...

please give an honest vote/feed as I did for you...help me close this shit... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141105

aiight... let's go for the close-out!!!

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

grammatix got this battle................ u lost this battle diesel................ and "askin me go vs you is bulldogs goin gainst poodles" is a ludacris line............ i wasnt feelin the punches on either end but grammatix had better ones and the flow was alil better....... adn the "if lyrics can kill" line is alil played" and u spent two lines on his "girl" that u dont even know prolly.......... no hate tho, but i think grammatix took this by bein slightly better in each aspect.......... aight......... and u good grammatix, even tho u dont agree wit me on that kany thing......... peace