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Voted For: Mad Dog

DAMMMMMMMMMMMMN this was a good topical.....both of you came out good...but im gonna have to give this one to mad dog....damn man that was a dope verse, good flow, great ENDING, good ideas all the way through, nice rhymes and use of vocab and wordplay...over all nice verse...magic you came good yourself, with good flow and ideas but i just liked reading and i liked mad dogs idea better....wicked ending i must say

v/mad dog

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Voted For: Mad Dog

hmmm


magic: your story line was focused enuff.. your imegry was better, but the story line a creativity wasnt the best..flow was iiight.. vocab was iiight..

maddog:your storyline was quite good.. the flow was a lil choppy, but the story line and creativity made up for that.. to be maddog won this battle, due to his creativity..

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Voted For: Mad Dog

mad dog had beta emotion,more depth and feeling.
structure was also better,i felt magic u ruined ur flow with the lil interludes between verses.this makes the reader hve to stop and think.gud idea,but restructure it 4 beta flow.....


havin said that i dnt consider struc that important but mad had the better vocab,multies.n general rhymes....
overall u both came good,but i was feelin the depth from mads more....
both keep elevating........

Voted For: Mad Dog

yo this battle was ill mad dog took it cuz of punchlines and some personals hehe you magiC you need elevation badly if you wanna beat this cat...