Voted For: jacktheripper24

Close one ya'll. But i gotta give it to jack. His flow was a little more enjoyable. But dog, ya lines wern't workin... quit the long ass line shit,... too long. And kid, i like ya punches, but ya flow wasn't the best. When you make a rhym make sure its somthin that other people can easilly find the flow to.

This was feedback posted for The Kid P-Dizzle
 

ha..and you say i'm not good kid, that was trash, bring something like that to our battle, and you'll truly get ripped..

Yo, uppin' for some more votes people, come on now.

Voted For: jacktheripper24

My vote goesto Jack....His stucture was weaker but the personals hit alot harder and his vocab was better also...
Kid your verse was tight but Jack pulled this off in my opinion

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Vote:Kid P Dizzle
Pretty even but i voted fo' The kid coz his structure was better than jacktheripper
No hate
Return tha favor
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Both of you delivered a good verse......

ripper.. your structure was kinda hard to read......flow wasn't great either...........multies were there but didn't build up into nay personals......although you had sum decent punches......

The Kid P-Dizzle...your flow and structure were good and you delvered sum real nice punches....and a u had a cuple good personals......I really liked this drop sum funny shyt.........
i liked these 4 lines:

But physically, I'll rip Jack another asshole
You say you thug but you's prolly a Donnie Brasco (an undercover)
You shouldn't even be allowed in here like Castro
In the U.S, you just give men coke treatments - fast blow
funny shyt man.....nice

Vote:The Kid P-Dizzle

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Yo I liked both verses I thought ripper was gon win it till I read K-P's finisher stronger finish but u shud work on the beginning and middle cuz ifg ripper had a gd finisher he wud have won. ripper dnt put '//' at the end of ur lines it's newbish retun da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142371