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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..



Ingenious mind......your flow was tight throughout verse, structure was good, imagery was nice, it was well written story, I liked the emotion of it as well, good overall drop I give ya.....8/10

LXD......also good story, good flow, structure coulda been a little better but your imagery wasn't as good as ingenious's, and the emotion of yours wasn't as strong but good drop just not enuff for win...giva ya....7/10

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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

ok:
ingenious mind:you had nice flow and good imagery with your words, ya verse rhymed very well, and you took the topic with the intensity and feeling in ya words...
slx:you had a nice verse too, but i think hers was a lot more emotional and lyrically pleasent to read, no hate, because you told a nice story, i just like the way hers flowed and the descriptiveness

Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Ingenius his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

Was pretty close, but I didn't like the fact that XD had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to IM... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho..

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