since i actually heard the song:
i think your style fits in with the others
the flow was good but i think it should be more complex.
actually lyrics was good and it was all about the same thing.
i'm not sure if it would be good to the beat though.

over all 7/10 keep it hot

thanx uppin

yo i liked da shit, it was str8, shit was fire!!!!!!!1, man u keep doin yall thang cus dat shit was hot keep spitten.

nice job on this, structure was off a tad bit, but the flow was good and strong lyrics, to the point, keep doing ya thing................................1

not my style- not really feelin it... but keep doin ya thing .1

um,thanx uppin

up up uppin

u got a prob wit str8 man this capitol punishment runnin it come bak hoe

me and srta8 koo,im jus fuckin wit em, still uppin

c'mon uppin

up up uppin