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eph 08-17-04 11:29 PM

2-1 uppin for more votes. dont sleep. votes wont be forgotten.

CODEE 08-17-04 11:36 PM

Voted For: Verbal Abuse

real nice flow and very good punchlines u got this one man really good job
uppin 4 votes
CODEE vs. Slick Skillz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143034

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

eph 08-18-04 01:14 PM

just cause hes losing, hes gotta go and get votes removed. well your gonna lose fairly. so why prolong it. next person that votes for Jdot is a Dick Rider. you can tell by the way he disqualified a vote, now hes gonna try and get a d/r just to tie things up.cmon now, play the game fair.

M-Eazy 08-19-04 04:10 PM

GOOD LOOKN PEOPLE...uppn this battle...i remember everybody who vote for me, i return HONEST votes...i aint forgot bout yall...uppi this

Typical 08-19-04 08:50 PM

Voted For: J DOT

ok this was close. so im gonna have to break it down.

verbal abuse:
Sprinkling Hate n Herbs to Steak My Terms. It Would Bite To Have A Tie.
Its Bad To Lie. If You Ever Text A Veteran Verse, Be Sure To Prep Your Alliby.
a little long but i liked it.

jdot:
You'll die in yo sleep, cause of the words out of your mouth
'Verball'ly 'Abuse' pricks like you ass i council(cancel) em out
hot word play.

verbal abuse:
Check Their Forum For Bordem, Its Time To Put Ends To This Fam.
IDK How Their Shit Hits Fans? Your Beef Aint Even Beef...Its Spam.
again u should have flowed it better but it was funny, played but still funny.

jdot:
When you learn, you dont want it dawg, I'll chalk you up
Ill erase you, pat em together, have you coughing up dust
i didnt see that comin...thas a good thing.

verbal abuse
Just Block Out Things, n Fold Your Hand Before I Drop An Ace, And Have To Knock Out Kingz.
i play poker, so i was feelin that.

jdot:
so stop yo act, you'll never be hard with yo fist
I sonned you twice, tell yo crew to put me on they Respect List
wasnt a punch but i thought it was a good way to end it.

verbal abuse:
besides that i feel like u had some filler but it still didnt flow that well. ur lines were streched.

jdot:
u had filler to but at least it flowed. n there wasnt as much.

personels::jdot
meta::VA
flow::jdot
punches::jdot
content::tie
wordplay::jdot
verbal could've got this wit betta flow. so watch out jdot
dont slack.
JDOT GETS THA VOTE

Typical 08-19-04 08:56 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Verbal Abuse
just cause hes losing, hes gotta go and get votes removed. well your gonna lose fairly. so why prolong it. next person that votes for Jdot is a Dick Rider. you can tell by the way he disqualified a vote, now hes gonna try and get a d/r just to tie things up.cmon now, play the game fair.




jus thought i should point out im not a dick rider cuz i voted for j dot
i broke that shit down.
no hate
no dickridin
good battle

Typical 08-19-04 09:09 PM

lets get some votes
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...511487&posted=1
ice pick vs typical

M-Eazy 08-20-04 09:28 AM

good lookn, forget verbal abuse, he trippn, thats just like me saying everybody who votes for him is d/r, stop whining VB....lets get some EXPLAINED votes in here

TAKENOTICE 08-20-04 10:10 AM

Voted For: J DOT

verbal you had a nice drop but your lines seemed streched out and the made the verse choppy and hard tah flow...
your punches were unformed like you set them up but they didn't really hit though some of them connected but some seemed play'd like the spam line...
Jdot your verse was simple punches were clearer even though some were weak...
some lines had streched rime like you tried tah force it still got what you was sayin...
not the best battle but all the same ...
Stay up Stay active VOTE often...

M-Eazy 08-20-04 01:26 PM

Uppn make these mutha fuckas understand...aiyo, this is too good of a battle to get slept on, lets get some votes in here...lets go people

i return honest votes

eph 08-20-04 03:38 PM

i cant believe your sorry verse is beating me.
you had 2 personals, mine was full of em...let us pray,

dear god, please bless Jodt with 3 more dick riders immediatly.

M-Eazy 08-20-04 06:35 PM

must not be too sorry...aiyo, V.B. you used to be a cool cat, wuts up, why u bitchin now, if every vote i gets a dick ride to u, then my dick would have prolly broke off...stop bitchin, let the people vote...i aint askn none of these people to vote for me...once again stop bitchin...and its 2 more dick riders, i guess ill correct you...lol...c'mon people, lets sit this bitch to rest...need some votes on this battle

Wrecker 08-21-04 10:05 AM

This was feedback posted for Verbal Abuse
 
stretched lines...they were really stretched..but was a good verse..

M-Eazy 08-21-04 10:29 AM

we dont need feedback, oh nevermind theres a 100 post block on there....aight, well thanx for checkn it out...uppn this, c'mon people, we need some votes on this

M-Eazy 08-21-04 02:17 PM

uppn this...we need some votes on this battle


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