Voted For: One-Man-Band

oh this was unfair as fuck stop picking on boomer .boomer ok verse but no real vocab or topical punches at all 1/10
one man band good vocab flow and wordplay this was a good topic and a damn good drop fo real you did you and gave a good visualzation 8/10

Voted For: One-Man-Band

yo boomer man i was feelin yo shit but i think one man took this cus his troy or w.e was good n eitin had me to want to keep readin, so boomer i mean i no u can coe stronga so keep elevatin, good battle yall

v/One man band

yo return da favor NO HATE!!
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Voted For: One-Man-Band

ok easy vote for omb even tho he embarrassed me in the cypher! j/k but he was the only one really going with the topic. boomer, when your in a topical battle, it isnt ur job to diss the other guy, ur just supposed to write a rap about the topic. omb, you can still work on the structure cuz if you notice ur font is super small and still goes to the end of the line sumtimes so its more than a lil streched. but overall good story. boomer regardless of your topical mishaps, you need to work on structure and flow first, then help your punchlines out. links in tha sig. no hate.