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Nynth Degree 08-15-04 01:17 AM

Bro, face it, you suck, it's just that simple...uppin'.

schema 08-15-04 02:06 AM

Voted For: Wrecker

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wrecker
Yeh Not Knowin Things Kid, Coz Your Verse Is Pure ASSumption..
And Ye Swingin Blindly, Coz "The Kid" Ain't Seen, Like In Abortions..
doesnt rhyme but i liked the second line

So Check My Numbers, Coz Like A Math Teacher, I'mma Set Yeh Order,
N Don't Be Surprised, Coz I'll Break "P's" (peace) Like A Taliban Supporter..
no...

Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..
ehh...pretty good first line second line was decent

Kid Am Always Above Yeh, So On My Entrance, This Herbs Bowin Down To Knees..
And You Cant Stop Wreck, Coz I'll Make P (pee) Burn Slowly, Like People Wit STD's..
nice closer

wheres your other bar? you had some decent shit except your second bar...nothing that jumped off the page at me but it was enough for the win...



Quote:
Originally Posted by The Kid P-Dizzle
I'm bout to wreck ya, just like I did to your mother's placenta
And your pops? He's the reason you at the rape crisis centa (center)
made me laugh...decent opener...(sidebar: placenta is what is attached to your stomach by your umbillical cord when you are born...its not in the woman until shes pregnant. i let it slide because biggie's said it before but it doesnt technically make any sense)

Don't pretend ta (to), act tough, you'll get smack up 'cuz you're not that
You should stop that, you're all up on my nuts like a jockstrap
played...

Dizzle killed this shit, but 5 bars is more awkward than your mom tellin' her parents you were illigitimate
not that nice of a closer...

5 bars = 10 lines...i wouldve voted for him because of that but his wasnt 5 bars either...you had a good thing going with your first bar but then the rest of it fell off...i voted on some other battle of yours and you came way harder...did you underestimate him here?


\/honest votes\/

Nynth Degree 08-15-04 01:18 PM

Yes, I did underestimate him...but thanks for that anatomy lesson, I'll keep that in mind next time I talk about someone's mom, haha...Uppin'

Kayem 08-15-04 01:58 PM

Voted For: Wrecker

None really came hard but wrecker had loads of wordplay and metas.......the kid had sum wordplay and punches but i didn't really feel em......neither drops were personal.........

Vote Wrecker

Yo i P-dizzle i seen sum much betta stuff from ya.....wat happned?

Nynth Degree 08-15-04 04:36 PM

I don't even know what happened here man, but still uppin'...

M&rk 08-15-04 07:53 PM

Voted For: Wrecker

we got ourselves an up and comer

And Ye Swingin Blindly, Coz "The Kid" Ain't Seen, Like In Abortions..
N Don't Be Surprised, Coz I'll Break "P's" (peace) Like A Taliban Supporter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..
And You Cant Stop Wreck, Coz I'll Make P (pee) Burn Slowly, Like People Wit STD's..
^^^your hot punches, or wordplay lines, all u need to work on is your lead in lines cuz they were all pretty gay and didn't lead into the next punch, if u lead into puches it can make your lines shorter and your puches more wittier and hit harder.
...... hot verse regardless

the kid...... u needed to come wit personals like wrecker, i would list the lines of your i liked but i dont like any of 'em.
so every catagory goes to wrecker.........
thanks for votin on my battle ,but u did say honest vote, and i agree wit that and speak wit my actions.
_______
wrecker return wit an honest vote on this battle, g'luck wit your other battles. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142432

Nynth Degree 08-15-04 08:13 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by pictureperfect2
...but u did say honest vote...

Pic, don't even worry about it, I ain't gone hold nothin' against you...you're one of those few people that ain't afraid to vote against someone who just voted for you, I respect that. Keep doin' your thing bro...

Ill-Grammatix 08-15-04 08:50 PM

Voted For: Wrecker

Yeh Not Knowin Things Kid, Coz Your Verse Is Pure ASSumption..
And Ye Swingin Blindly, Coz "The Kid" Ain't Seen, Like In Abortions..
--wack opener...work on it

So Check My Numbers, Coz Like A Math Teacher, I'mma Set Yeh Order,
N Don't Be Surprised, Coz I'll Break "P's" (peace) Like A Taliban Supporter..
---nice second line but the set-up was blah!

Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..
---wack... filler lines

Kid Am Always Above Yeh, So On My Entrance, This Herbs Bowin Down To Knees..
And You Cant Stop Wreck, Coz I'll Make P (pee) Burn Slowly, Like People Wit STD's..
---ok closer... again, setup was wack


I'm bout to wreck ya, just like I did to your mother's placenta
And your pops? He's the reason you at the rape crisis centa (center)
--ehh... ya get a pass for that one

Don't pretend ta (to), act tough, you'll get smack up 'cuz you're not that
You should stop that, you're all up on my nuts like a jockstrap
--played, on the wack side... elevate ya skill level here

Dizzle killed this shit, but 5 bars is more awkward than your mom tellin' her parents you were illigitimate
--one line stretched into 2... not a good closer

ok... neither one of you dropped the required 5 bars... just so you know... a bar consists of 2 lines... one line is NOT a bar!

Wrecker took this easy with better rhymes and flow... wordplay was also better... not much of it but it was cool when it came out

P-diz... stop listening to Kurtis Blow...lol..kidding... but yeah, ya style was "going way back" like stetsasonic and the cold crush brothers... come to da light homie... keep elevatin

Nynth Degree 08-16-04 01:09 AM

Yeah, everyone's been disappointed with me on this one, uppin'...

CODEE 08-16-04 01:12 AM

Voted For: Wrecker

that was good wrecker u got him on that one especially this line "Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer"


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