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Voted For: ShackleS
VOTE SHACKLES ~He couldn't flow if he was made out of water~ ~this battle's like tha jews in world war 2, he's gettin slaughtered~ liked that line shackles had descent wordplay , flow and some descnet lines UZI needs to up his vocab to much weapon talk and basically no creativity in it, You need to try a different type of battle style instead of the constant weapon SHIT |
This was feedback posted for <UzI>
good battle cant vote rite now but i will once im allowed
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Voted For: ShackleS
Im gonna weigh u down and smoke ya like a ounce, Got u in my sights now im gonna pounce, No Good Punch 1/5 Cos dis is a lyrical genocide-Poison ya mind wid cyanide, Shall i crush u physically?Mentally?Or lyrically? No Punch, Ok Vocab 2/5 Go back 2 skool and learn ur basic physickz, U come bare-foot like fred flintstone-Cause of death still no-1 knowz, Gonna whip me wid yo' pistol-Kill ur flowz wid my crossbow, Dont Understand Your Structure 0/5 Coz i move thru tha third-world,My third eyes tha guidin light- Come bitch invite a fight,Coz we all gonna muthafuckin die 2nite- No Not Feeling 1/5 Crunch time in tha first quarter,From tha worst slaughter-coz u poisinin my holy water-Y son challenge?U gonna get merked-Like i was elmo and u was big bird, Not Feelin 1/5 C i munched u up and shit u out Turd-Mite as well call u a lame ass herb -So stop dere dont say a word-Plz we dont wanna hear anutha verb-WORD- Ok Flow, Still Aint Like Structure--- Vote - Shackles Better Structure, And Punches Wasnt Feelin Uze At All Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137773 |
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Voted For: ShackleS
ok battle structure: shakles ( love the shit out of it) flow: shakles opener: shakles (uzi's was self glory) punches: shakles vote/ shakles ( go figure) yo can u plz return the favor!!!! i spent time voting so u can atleast vote on my battles preferibly both HONEST votes http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143508 |
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