Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

myster e got riped demon was more lyrical

Yo can you explain that further please because that didn't really give sufficient explanation and I don't wanna get the vote DQ'd.

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Voted For: Myster.E

myster e took this...he had a better flow an he came harder with his punches

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both came off pretty well in this battle, demon had a better structure in my opinion which would have probably won him this, but im not voting. myster, i felt your vocab was a bit simpleat times, like "it and wit" and you did rhyme "it" to itself a few times. try and up your vocab man !

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good drop demon, nice opener and closer....just feed not a crew vote

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Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

Voted For: Demon Pyrokoonix

Structure - Demon, he had straighter lines, that were more parallel and looked more appealing..

Punches - Demon, he came out immediatley with punchlines and disses, though elusiv did not, plus mercs were a little more creative..

personals, both can elevate here, none really stuck out..

Flow, I guess that this is a tie, i didn't see anything wrong with your flows..

Vocab, both need to elevate. Myster even made no sense in one part, when he said that his rhymes covered in rust.yes they were!Demon: I liked he got Jackson in avatar

Overall, Demon, his verse made more sense and also had better punchlines and stucture which give an overall better verse..

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Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

Demon gets my vote becuz..he had harder punches than Myster..and that they connected..tha was good..wordplay & structure were ok..7/10
Myser.E. ...yo punches were ok..but not as hard tho..the flow was good..and the structure was a little stretchy...5/10

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