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Spektikul 08-15-04 10:24 PM

This was feedback posted for emcee_shadow
 
yo nice spit shadow...just feed, not a crew vote...

Reflect 08-16-04 04:02 PM

This was feedback posted for emcee_shadow
 
nice verse shadow, good vocab, flow, structure could be better but blah . . nice verse. diesel, wasn't likin your verse, sorry man, "ya couldnt elevate if i pointed u to an escalator
man ya as weak as the fuckin 1st terminator" i liked that line, but apart from that, i felt your verse was full of basic rhymes such as "skill n will" n "battle n rattle", try and up your vocab man. no beef

Hitchcock 08-16-04 04:11 PM

Voted For: emcee_shadow

yooo these multies were sick if not a lil drawn out but still they got the job done shadow's punches were ight too
n structure was good personal was ight at the end so the battle goes tho shadow
Diesel could have had the hottest punch in the battle about (i wanna clear your eyes so you can see
that u couldnt throw a punch if u were muhhamed ali)
but it wasnt really worded the best so it didnt come off that hard n that was pretty much all Diesel came with
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Klassic 08-17-04 07:21 AM

thanx boyZ shadow nice fuckin drop, aight uppinn, and yall lethal might wanna know that i didnt come to this battle, i jsut wrote it, but w/e got some responses on one of ma weakest, UPPPPPPPPPPPINNNNNNNNNNn

System Crasher 08-18-04 09:16 PM

Voted For: emcee_shadow

I think Emcee's got this... he had better flow and i liked his rhymes etter....
V/ emcee_shadow

Crasher~~~~~~~~~~~

System Crasher 08-18-04 09:17 PM

Return tha FAVA!!!! :thumbup: System Crasher Vs. Fr3mSoul

50Cal. 08-18-04 09:22 PM

Voted For: emcee_shadow

ok diesal the 1st termanitor was gansta and why would you make his balls jigga huh!!? and them terminator and ali lines are played no good punches or disses ok flow and strture 2/10
shadow good vocab good cola line good punches strture is bad fix that and you straight good disses too 6/10
basically a murder shadow takes it in all areas

Logic The Goonie 08-20-04 02:37 PM

Voted For: emcee_shadow

lol...breakdown...

$LXDiesel-bad punches, decent structure but whack personals as in NO personals.the opener was reallllly gay, never mention balls jiggling in a battle ever again. other than that you just dropped a average noob verse...5/10

emcee_shadow-decent drop. nice punches good vocab, structuire needs to get better tho. decent personals but you can get elevated some more...6.75/10


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