Voted For: Soulless

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soulless~ya verse was good,nice punches and personals, ya flow was good and structure, i think you had the stronger overall verse here,nice name diss and opener....good job
charlemagne~ya verse was good too, you had some punches in there as well and ya flow and structure was good this time,but i don't think ya punches were a sstrong as soulless"..
VOTE:soulless

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Voted For: Soulless

As few punches as there were in this battle, Soulless' were harder and connected, I was feelin' that allergy season line. Chrlemagne, just elevate bro, you need some practice...Einstein caught in an ice storm? What??? No hate though...
Vote - Soulless

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tight battle both of you.

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Voted For: Kid Charlemagne

Ha..Lmao..Nyce Drop From Charm..that last bar was pretty nice made me laugh..

Punches- Charm..
Personals- Charm..
Werdplay- Charm (had 1 weak one..but had it..)
Flow- Both Were Good..
Complex- Charm..
Vote- Charm..

Additional..Soulless That Was An Ok Verswe, But It Be Better If You Made It More Complex, Some Of The Punches Seemed Simple..

Voted For: Soulless

both of you were iight and you both came close on this battle
ima give this to Soulless for a better verse overall with better lines. i felt that he had better punches and his personals were good i also liked his flow and structure. Kid, your was iight but improve more on your punches

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Voted For: Kid Charlemagne

to son someone, is to treat them with the tough hand, 0f a father. discipline them like they are your son, or punk them like a father would do a son, reduce them to the level of your son, because they are too scared not to do what you say. IT's basically punking someone, or making them look stupid. that's why many cats say,
only cat that can son me is my pops.
lesson learned.

charle-good opener diss, nice flip, good persy. kinda left in the dark on the second one though. this battle came to, none of you had raw material on each other, so you had to go with small stuff, that didn't make much difference in terms of a hard diss. both of these verses needed help.
but i felt charle's verse more because of the start.

soulless, came out too friendly on the second line i think, i get what you were trying to say, but it just sounded to friendly for a battle. good persy usage though.

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Voted For: Kid Charlemagne

soulless that was weak no good punches or disses but a decent flow and strcture still you need to work on vocab 3/10
kid this was good nice flow and vocab was decent the avay line was slick good disses overall nice 5/10

makus vote was hate cuz i am merkin him in our battle..........


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Voted For: Soulless

this was a wack battle
pesonals soulless
multies soulless
punches soulless
flow soulless
vocab soulless
wordplay soulless
structure niether
creativity soulless
overall soulless