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Voted For: Twizted

Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Twis. his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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This was feedback posted for illuson
 

god damn this bitch sucks yo you need real elevating nigguh wat

ups for ya ass he gots a good point

Voted For: illuson

um ya

punches- luson cuz u had some
personals- luson cuz u had one
multis- neither of yall had em
metas- neither of yall had em
word play- neither of yall had em
flow- Twiz

Luson- weak verse, u need to elevate, punches, personals, basically everythin needs to be elevated

Twiz- aight verse, but u have to throw punches, this isnt a topical, youd be good in topicals.

Luson:
"see my ass ya can kiss it
every rhyme ya do ya bit it" weak punch, best i found

Twizted:
"I saw the shit on the news just the other day,
I ain't for singing no blues, I'ma make 'em pay," i liked it. but try topicals.

v/luson

Voted For: Twizted

twizted
got this he was harder with his lines and he had better vocab shit nice structure and ha had better verse

illuson
you need to come harder mayn and make ya verse longer

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Voted For: Twizted

aiigh ez battle twizted took this..better vision i culd feel it..better vocab..u had better anything no need to explain illuson is 0-14 shoot

twizted return the fav and drop a vote in this battle

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Voted For: Twizted

you won...........................................

nufff said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


that nigga should be dq cuz he had to have voted for his self....

think nout it????????????????