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Voted For: String9487

u a hypochondriac rapper, u just THINK u ill

if u bought all ya copies, u still couldnt sell a song
tell me how u gon b a THUG n spelled it wrong???..bitch
^^^hot lines feellin 'em

first one creative, and other one good personal

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thugzy

your verse was shit.. u just randomly said stuff,
like......


hardcore,lyrics rip ya bones like cardboard/
net text lord,flip computer ports to starboard/
..... um are u really ganna do this. are u really that good..... hmm... i dont think so, and even if u were u wouldn't say it that shits jus gay and not a punch, read how to battle, u dont jus say shit u ganna do and that the person is "like cardboard" u say shit like those lines i said were hot by string.

but anyway this is a honest vote even though i do think thugzy is a bitch who hasn't opened our punchline battle yet... SEND ME A PM SAYIN YOUR DOWN, AND SET IT UP YOURSELF OR TELL ME TOO, I JUST NEED YOUR PERMISSION TO RIP YA. ......... hit battles up, links in my sig.

Voted For: String9487

chose winners verse

yo, u started feelin the pressure, it'll crack ya dome
only thing that u spray, is ya AXE cologne
decent punch...to simple to be hot...5/10
i aint worried cuz this beginner's rap's wack
im here to administer, sinister rap slaps
aight punch...you can tell it was a filler 4/10
BLAT BLAT, u better step back-fam
the bullets eat away at ya face like Pac-Man
average punch...nice flow..i was feelin it 7/10
my flow a menace, u'll need Army troops to stop it
u aint a THUG, i seen ya Barney suit in the closet
pretty good....nothin to special 6/10
bitch...watch how the shotty gon hit ya
ima put u in bag, wit a body long zippa
nice punch...aight flow...direct hit 6/10
im sicka,.. nigga, peep the skills
u a hypochondriac rapper, u just THINK u ill
basic punch....good wordplay 5/10
dog u not hot, u dont got the show locked
n the only "burners" u pack is on ya stove top
[b]nice punch...hit hard...good wordplay 6/10
if u bought all ya copies, u still couldnt sell a song
tell me how u gon b a THUG n spelled it wrong???..bitch
[b]good closer...nice personal 8/10

v/string

please return favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143293

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Voted For: String9487

String9487

"yo, u started feelin the pressure, it'll crack ya dome
only thing that u spray, is ya AXE cologne"

Could have worded it better to create a better punch. But still, nice concept there.

"i aint worried cuz this beginner's rap's wack
im here to administer, sinister rap slaps"

Kind of weak, but also kind of hard hitting bar

"BLAT BLAT, u better step back-fam
the bullets eat away at ya face like Pac-Man"

Nice bar.

"my flow a menace, u'll need Army troops to stop it
u aint a THUG, i seen ya Barney suit in the closet"

Ooooh!

"bitch...watch how the shotty gon hit ya
ima put u in bag, wit a body long zippa"

Weak.

"im sicka,.. nigga, peep the skills
u a hypochondriac rapper, u just THINK u ill"

Nice again.

"dog u not hot, u dont got the show locked
n the only "burners" u pack is on ya stove top"

They just keep coming....

"if u bought all ya copies, u still couldnt sell a song
tell me how u gon b a THUG n spelled it wrong???..bitch"

Ok.


Thugzy:

"hardcore,lyrics rip ya bones like cardboard/
net text lord,flip computer ports to starboard/"

Self- boast. Works sometimes, but not this time for you.

"start thinkin ma rhymes cold,trust,pussy you wrong,
trigger ya sprinklers,an start settin off alarms/"

Don't know about this one.

"no fucker wants beef,holla at a mod for the stat sheet/
i win votes even if ma verse weak,cos no one wants they ass beat/"

Decent here, though bottom line is a little stretched.

"ya could call it extortion,mans approach me with caution/
leave ya burnt,mama told u,shoulda worn tht sun lotion/"

almost decent.

"flows disgusting,leave blood from ya broken nose just gushin/
am throwin blows in dozens,givin string concussions/"

Dig the multis. They added to the punch.

"ma lines turn ya 94 to 1,tie up ya strings ya dun/
this puppet on rv,thugzy turn ya wins to a none/"

eh,not feelin' this.

"bitch wer ya from,u in police protection,locations gone/
can play conkers on a string,split ya,ya get stomped/"

weak.


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Voted For: THUGZY

Opener - Thugzy, hittin hard right off the bat
Closer - Thugzy, great finish
Punches - Thugzy, threw'em left an right
personals - Thugzy, Strings whole verse had none
Metas - Neither had strong ones
Mulies - Thugzy, Strings attempts were weak
Structure - Thugzy, Strings wasn't as good

Thugzy took this one because of was harder punches and nice multies. String your overall verse was quite weak in my opinion, elevate...

Return the favor with an honest vote, as I have done for both of you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...510281&posted=1

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