Voted For: Paramik

Paramik Took This In My Eyes...

Just A Better Punch and WordPlay..

Vote - Paramik

~R~

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uppin..

Voted For: e-dubz

ok there isnt much to say in a punchline battle but vote to dubz cuz his was a better punch. paramik, urs was kinda repetitive wit the "L"'s and shit and the line is kinda streched. paramik had the better vocab tho. e-dubz the punch was coo but the way u used the personal could have been done better. u know this isnt a hate paramik lol -1-

v//e-dubz

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Upping for honest votes please don't DR

This was feedback posted for e-dubz
 

check'n this out.

Voted For: Paramik

this was aight...e-dbuz i wasnt too much feelin, and it didnt make since, creative and punch, but the way you worded it was poor

paramik had a nice bar also...it couldve been better, but it was a harder punch, and made more since...good flow

overall-keep practicing and, good flow, but try to be more creatvie and use bigger words(enhance your vocab)

i drop all HONEST votes, even if i get voted against...good flow...no hate e-dubz on your flow either dubz

drop votes to the below links...

Voted For: e-dubz

wow...both played as fuck, but the "ill" shit is super played
v/edubz

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I would vote if i could, but i can't because of my limited posts, one question though, why in the fuck do people judge flow in a damn punchline battle, i thought that you were supposed to judge the punch?

Voted For: e-dubz

one bar?... not too much feed back but e got this for better word play