Voted For: Trooper

aiight.. trooper got this.. better structure, it wasnt a compleate knock out, intensity had some alrite rhymes, but basically there was better flow n punches in troopers verse..

vote- trooper

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upp'in for FULLY EXPLAIN VOTES AND NO DICK RYDERS PLEZ.....

im not saying u is but u never know........

Voted For: Trooper

First off big ups to both of ya for takin the time to post ya verses. First off I come to flow and structure, the flow wasnt too bad from intensify but the structure was here and there. Trooper you had a nice flow and good structure to compliment it as well. The punches from both were decent, I noticed off the bat intensify tried to get personal but it was a lilttle more self glorification. Trooper took the battle straight to him with his punches and was prepared to win. Trooper came out on top in about all of the categories.

v/Trooper

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Voted For: Trooper

this was a one sided battle trooper took this in every topic..intensify you need to elevate cuz you ain't gonna win againt me like this.....good battle

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Face it bitch u still goin 2 lose lol

Uppin this shit

Leave an explained vote so he wont get hiz panties in a bunch

Voted For: Trooper

Both had aight structure, but Troop came with harder punches and better flow. i.e your first 2 lines were dragged out a little too long to keep the flow going. No hate though, good battle...
Vote - Trooper

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nice battle tooper

Uppin

Voted For: Trooper

Trooper had the whole nine.. better rhymes, stucture and punches.. the structure was flawless and the punches connected, intesify had a couple of stretched lines, not too bad, but you had more complex language also, better vocab, overall your verse hit harder..

returbn favor right here cuz, thx..
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Voted For: Trooper

you came hard with the vocab i was feelin it......you already no wat your doing you dont really need work with anything....effect you was coo but need to come a lil harder...