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Eclipsik 08-18-04 03:33 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Eclipsik
Voted For: G

I guess Infallible had a chance, up until THIS point:

"maybe then I wouldn't have 2 do u like this & we could jus b friendz
but I'ont give up like no ho ass bitch, so I'm fightin 2 da end"

That's not the type of stuff you put in a battle. Every other aspect of your verse was bogish. Didn't grip me at all.

G, however, came with the wordplay,(real nice wordplay)

"Grill your body with ease, cuz youre nothin but a newbie,
slice you in "half", and "bake" you, like Dave Chapelle's movie!"

This and the opening bar were the strongest.

vote=G

Me and you should battle. We seem evenly matched, it'd be a good one.
Need to get used to this system.



Fixed

FLiP AkA JR 08-18-04 03:40 AM

This was feedback posted for G
 
i gotta give this to G for a better punches,structure and wordplay....his verse is complex...

Eclipsik 08-18-04 03:47 AM

G wins :thumbup:

Note to vbulletin: This, is NOT a vote, but a singnaling to close this thread. G has won. :thefinger

G 08-19-04 12:35 AM

Up.

La Cosa Nostra 08-19-04 02:06 AM

Voted For: G

aiight at times this was even and at times G had it easy. infallible, there were times were the bars didnt connect rhyme wise. n a lot of your bars didnt have punchlines, which is a big downfall.. you need to work on structuring and vocab could probably use a bit of work aswell..

G... aiight, your lines were structured a hell of a lot better and flowed a lot better then infallible, and your punches hit harder. thats why you won this...

vote- G


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