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~Sonofisis~ 09-01-04 05:52 PM

and don't hate on my vote like you did the other guy, i'll simply rexplain to strobe himself and tell him to recount it. I really think that he took this, no hate..

Dirty Nigga 09-08-04 08:51 AM

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

Aight, No Contest....

SLICK Hands Down...

Slick Ya Had Few Nice Metas n Punches, Nice Structure Too, Easy To Ride n Easy To Catch The Melody...
Improve On Vocab Tho...


your skillz aint slick or sick all day they ride dicks
your from hell then bitch go back to hell bitch
get out of RV and and go live in your RV
i'll flip you lie a burger bitch and sprinkle you like sardeens
^^^^
Da Fuck Is All That About?

Man, That Didnt Make No Sense An With Them 4 Lines I Couldnt Concentrate On The Rest...

Improve On Wordplay n Use Punches An Metas
KEEP ELEVATIN BOTH YA'LL...

Return The Favr n Vote On My Battles

P E A C E

Sik Wit It 09-10-04 11:23 PM

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

Im Votin For SLicK~SKiLLz, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But SlicK Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

UnKnoWn-KiLLa 09-11-04 12:07 PM

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

aight aight slick owned this shit.....

flow=slick
structure=slick
punches=slick
wordplay=neither


best line for slick

my rymes are ~reck-less~ im not even tryin and im ~takin-this~
when i seen u i seen a free ~win~ ~proov-in~ that u suck and u showin no ~competition~




best line for yung gun..



you'll lose if you chalenge me to a real fight
i'ma fuck yo bitch all thru the fuckin night



nice battle..good try yung gun holla at me if ya wanna battle..

Epical 09-15-04 09:43 PM

This was feedback posted for SLicK~SKiLLz
 
one sided battle.

punches- Slick
personals- Slick
multis- Slick
multas- Yung (cuz he tried em)
word play- Slick

Slick nice verse. Keep bringin hard punches, u kinda slack off in a line. U may think oo one line, but one line can help u win or lose.

Yung- weak punches, elementary rhymes, im not big on struture but i kno some people r so work on structure. Lotta stretched lines.

Slick:
" when i seen u i seen a free ~win~ ~proov-in~ that u suck and u showin no ~competition~" nice punch.

Yung:
"go back to the crummy streetz you fuckin hobo
go back to fuckin yo men you fuckin homo" not great. talkin bout bein gay, *yawn* notin original.

v/Slick if i could vote

mc-bad-boy 09-16-04 02:14 PM

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

nice battle
slick win this 1
mor n better punches
all his verse was better i lyked his better
the other guyz was alright but not as good
click skills wins hands down


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