Voted For: RymheReaper

yoyoyoyoyo, battle was straight, Mr. Bonks ova there was wak fo real, keep writin man.... He was talkin like he had won already, caue he wasn't sayin nuttin.... I was feelin reaper. The first bar
"Ill sever ya mandable my jaws spit fire like roman candles/
yur chances of winning are so remote they turn tv channles/"
fiya..... near the end u kinda fell off, but keep it up

Voted For: RymheReaper

your good ur great..........................9.4/10

uppin yo

Voted For: RymheReaper

Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
RymheReaper

his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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uppin yo

This was feedback posted for RymheReaper
 

All Rhymereaper I Cant Raise Da Bar// But Rhymereaper U Won Dis Fo Sho Mayne Punches Killing It Mayne

~peace~

Yo Rhymereaper Can U Raise Da Bar On My Battle Against Upfront

uppin yo

uppin yo

Voted For: RymheReaper

rhyme reaper took this battle bcuz his structure was on point and he had the best punch in the whole battle>(Ill sever ya mandable my jaws spit fire like roman candles/
yur chances of winning are so remote they turn tv channles)
im not gonna say to take off the lil slashes at the end cuz i think those help but erebody else on here says its "newbish" so i guess those have to go but u had better vocab n and ight attempt at multies Big bonks verse was pretty wack it was real basic n the structure was reall lackin just work on that n elevate ur vocab
holla at me
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