Voted For: ProVerse

lol

Opener: Proverse-i liked it Raptors sucked
Closer: Pro- Was better
Multi: None
Punches: Proverse- they hit harder
Structure: proverse- was good but need to fix it more


weak battle but proverse gots it

uppin yet again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanx 4 all da crits

Voted For: ProVerse

yo
punches=proverse
metas=proverse
multis=proverse
flow=raptor
begin=proverse
end=raptor
/v/=Proverse

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YO FUKC ALL THAT RUBRIC SHIT I SED B 4, WHAT DOES IT MATTER? I DON'T KNOW ANYMORE AND DON'T CARE. WHAT I DO CARE ABOUT IS, THE FACT THAT A QUACKASS MUTHAFUKA(EMPIRE) WHO DUCKD ME IS TRYN TUH JUDGE ME, SO 4 ALL FUTURE VOTERS, ENJOY SEEING WUT THIS BITCH DODGE ME OVER:

Fuk empire! Eagle Merk Pussies In Rap Easy
'Specially fukin 'Imp's, On 'Pyres' my fires gleaming

Cuz I bring, Terror like 'Turbans' N air machine'ree
And horror to the face of NewYorkers, On TV grieving

I'm killer, a "NYNJA" New York New Jersey Assassin
Shoot 'Adam' in the 'Apple', Wit 'Brick's in the 'City' stash 'em

U fear me-Like Whites, when there's Arabs in air traffik
I penetrate the 'Empire State', Like 'twin Towers'

I'm Luke Sky-Returned as Jedi, Smashin 'Empires'
Or France, When they killed 'Ristocratic & Pompous Hi-ups

Better still, The Greeks at Marathon fightin 'Dare-I-Us'
No wait! How bout Visigoths, Set'n Roman streets afire

All instances, of people rebellin in uprisin's
What do we share in common?, We fuk'd up an 'Empire'

Now Fuk this!, Enuf this lame shit!-U fukin coward
I'M 'KING OF EMPIRES'!!, But Yours is fallin down now

So 'Empress'-no more talkin shit!, I got my gun out
!!POWWW!! Oh shit it went off!!, Don't fukin fall down!!

Whoa Shit!!-Ya'll SEE THAT!! His Spirit jus ran & leapt out!
His Big Mouth-I Squat down right over him, 'Scuse the shit soun

raptor dont get pissed jus cuz you losin

uppin for some votes....................................

Voted For: ProVerse

Proverse gave it 2 TOR his wordplay
was ill gotta give him da battle
TOR dont get me wrong yo shit was
good but not goood enuff diss time
vote on my battles in my sig i voted on
ya battle

Voted For: ProVerse

im gonna have to give htis to you...i was feelin that fossil line...no one can dig oyu..that was hot.......your verse was lot easier to read...your rhymes also just flowed better to...good meta4s and personals i like how you played offf his name...................raptor you lose from the begining you should of had a better opening