Voted For: Milk-E-Wae

madly weak battle....... if thats what u wanna call it.

ok listen up, i dont even have to rhyme to whip ur ass
ur wack, u cant fight either, so bring ur ass to my crib and i'll prove it to ya... thats it, this is all i gotz to drop motherfucker!
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what what what, that didn't eve rhyme, wasn't a punch or personal and awful sturcture. it doesn't really get anyworse than that. at least u swore, if u didn't i woulda swore that u were 8 years old.

i pull this trigger, quicker, and throw splinters with rhymes/
have u pissed off, like cartman n a long lunch line/
^^^nice metaphor, but not a punch. so not good in a battle, but u win with your ability to compare two things, shows your more elevated than the other kid.

return wit a discriptive vote here.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143415
all the votes got dq'd for inadiquate feedback so if your ganna vote make it adiquate.

and read the tutorials if your at all serious about rapbattles