i have niggaz from sqaud dump on ya ride..
can say 1 punchline watch ya whole carrier die..
mah shells pop like GrEaSe wen chiken fry..

theeze tuff emcees was tha same dudes n prison on they kneez..
or lettn sperm bust n they cheeks..

i culdnt b beat if they had a whip 2 mah ass..
n i cant "Get No Better"like swizz said wit Cass
i chop ya body up n leave it n a bag..
taped..den shove it n a box with them tasty cakes..
send ya family a copy of tha murda tape..

u froze wen i put tha stick 2 ya frame..
n wen ya gurl seen mah dick she had a stroke/heart attack like Rick James

it was average but u gots 2 get 3 wins to get in either way so go get 3 wins and come tryout again...

^ lol yea...

iight i need sum votes 4 mah battles

damn man........elevate

uppin 4 tryouts.............

uppin for tryouts...................don't worry if we see potential we'll pick ya up

hey yalls... that new kid shyt was kinda weak... sorry man, i gotta speak tha truth. you got some hard rhymes and by hard i mean you sound tuff but theres more to it than that... personally, i like clever punchlines that make you think or make you laugh, ya know? you got punchlines, but just make them stronger and you'll be a better mc... as of rite now, you wouldnt get my vote... but maybe when you elevate like Street said... then you could have a better chance

uppin for tryouts....................................

Uppin'...

Uppin' for some more tryouts...

uppin yall come on tryout

a lil freestyle
 

now when i come through ya hood u better watch ya back
cause the slugz from the mack will leave ya ass laid flat
ya wack i'll leave the whole clip tossed in ya back so how u feel about that
u run ya mouth to me and you'll be getting clapped
i don't mean the std i mean by the heater that'll throw ya ass up in the tree
if u fucking with me then ya life is over
to beat me you'll be need good luck like a four leaf clover
nigga i already told ya that u can't beat beat me
and spitting shit this crazy don't come easy
i can take ya life in a matter of seconds
and leave ya ass with no room like a hotel check in
so don't make me pull my weapon
cause when heater lets slugz fly their like body builders they just start flexing

if u don't like that then i have some battles going that u could check out

nice

He could use a little elevation, but we can help him out there. I say he's in, what y'all think?