yo it was good but needs work on the structure

Yea Yea, Same Here...You Wanna Battle Get @ Me, Set It Up Then Lemme Know When U Want Me To Drop A Verse
!!1!!

i aint no blood, but if yous a crip,
sorry fo ya if, dat ass gets hit,
you noe wat, will start to drip,
BLOOD BITCH, u start to leak,
like a bitch, on her fuckin rag,
hollow tips, leave u in a bag,
like i wuz, shopping for grocery,
at food maxx, sheit ur forcin me,
to point n laugh, at sumthing so sad,
another crip, takes another sip,
and gets his, fuckin thoat slit,
got you in, those cheap seats,
punk crips, make ur nose bleed,
so everyone, dat i see is a blood to me

man i feel u
but dat wasn't dat tight
u need 2 take mo time on it
but when u get it rite i'll
collab wit u on it
1

jus sum shit i threw together to pay homage to dem bloodz, i dont bang but mai family iz all bloodz so fawk all dem crabs, DGF Dangerous Guamain Family, and yo sinn and sHoTTaBoY good shit wit wat ya'll wrote stay up ......... gone

i see how u feel my whole
family is bloods 2 dats why
i said dat shit

wuznt sure u wasnt talking bout mai shit but yea it aint da best sheit i wrote but im in computer class bored so i jus wrote it im in here tryin to get dat money if u feel me, cuz any way u get dat papper is a grind nah mean, but if u want to collab fo sho im new to dis sheit so jus get at me......gone

aight ima take yo verse n and
mine on in a new thread so it'll
be a whole song koo

naw neva mind
i got sumtin else 2 do
wit my crew maybe sum other time

yea go for it jus let me noe wat da thread called

aite check out drop a couple of hot lines i drop two other versus in dere tell me wat u think

fuck a slob :shoot:

yeah bloods up!!!!!


but these rhymes sux


im being real if you gone be a "net gangster" then step your game up..

fake ass net gangster's ..dont tell me thats what 90% a this site is tryna be...

any way ..yopu need to step your drops up ...but im only comenting on this drop..i never seen anyothers a yours

Uhhhhhhhh, If You'd Care To READ It PROPERLY An NOT ASSUME I'm Some ''Net Thug''

I Clearly Stated I'm Not A Gangster, An This Was One Of My First Ever Posts On Here, Juss Sumthin I Threw 2gether, Elevated Alot Since Then......

Quit Talkin Shit n Assumin Things My Nigguh.............................