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Voted For: NewKid
yo newkid, hit it hard, but you need more personals, you can elevate more, but you hit hard wiht some punchlines man. good multis imwhiteurdead - man you had a pretty weak verse, no beef but you didnt hit hard enough i htink a couple multis, but it coulda been way better my vote - newkid |
Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead
nice structure and wordplay, nice job. the other guy was very plain, vote back on my battle with shake spear kid, thx bro, appreciate it http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=145335 |
Voted For: NewKid
Alotta self G's lately...anyway u got this coz u were less self-glory both strucs were aight automatically leading to good flow but NewKid had a better verse due to his actual punches the other guy needs to work on his wordplay and actually work out on lining up punches and makin personals...but i feel ya both could work on that... |
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