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Yvonne 09-09-04 11:50 AM

lol.......


uppin peeps.............uppin

intensify effect 09-09-04 12:59 PM

SHOTTABOY GET OFF MY NUTS....

i vote for who wins point blank,
and all of a sudden i get a vote for paramilk we dick ryde each other???

fuck outta here cuz he dont always vote for me WTF u talking about...
and i aint know i was battling a female.....

stay in place dunny......

Yvonne 09-09-04 02:55 PM

for fuck sake uppin this shit yp

Sik Wit It 09-11-04 10:27 AM

Voted For: XxXtayve

Im Votin For Yv, Cuz Her Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Lack..(dont space them out...), Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But Yv Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

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Yvonne 09-11-04 12:06 PM

thanx



uppin

Nynth Degree 09-11-04 12:16 PM

Voted For: XxXtayve

Ok, both verses were aight. Effect came w/ some good punches, but in his whole drop he was talking about a man, even though he wasnn't battling one. Yvonne you came with some good multis and some nice wordplay, but Effect had you on structure. Your lines were a little stretched, but that's nothing a little practice won't fix. Overall I'm giving this to Yvonne 'cuz her drop was just more on point...
Vote - Yvonne

Return the favor to the link in my sig, honest votes only...

intensify effect 09-11-04 04:18 PM

yo i swear i dont be knowing if its a female or a male im battling....

this happen already N i lost cuz my hits was for a male N i aint know...

WTF...

I AINT TRYING TO BATTLE NO-ONE ELSE WITHOUT THEM STAT"ING THEY SEX....

Yvonne 09-11-04 05:36 PM

lol shit happens yo..........



uppin

Archeologist 09-11-04 06:54 PM

Voted For: XxXtayve

Shit for real?
Intensity effect your verse was wack you dissing yvonna as if she's a guy. your shit was realy weak no punches that hit at all. wat the fuck is stoled? did u mean stole.

Yvonne you dropped nice girl for real ok punches that hit atleast flow was poor but multi's were decent.
Pz.

intensify effect 09-12-04 02:34 AM

ya need to stop voting on weather or not i made a mistake and diss a girl and focus on what was said insted of ooo no that was weak since it was ment for a boy and u battle a girl cuz thats straight up hate.......

Yvonne 09-12-04 03:12 PM

^^nah dude chill....it aint a hate vote....errbody got their impressions on verses....

imagine u reading a verse wrongly directed to a guy....deep down u wouldnt feel the verse........nah mean?



uupin this bitch peeps........uppin

Yvonne 09-14-04 10:08 AM

uppin this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yvonne 09-14-04 03:17 PM

uppiun this muh fucker peeps.....................wdf

~Luciano~ 09-14-04 08:34 PM

Voted For: XxXtayve



even if the bunner on my hip, ya nose still gonna "smell da Glock".. bro
cuz like ya sister boyfrined, when i bust in ya crib ya sis i'll be like so?
1/10 weak opener
u gay herb i'll tan ya hide like leather in friction
my gat'll split u stiff into "four-kast" like a weather prediction *ha*

1/10
i'll drown ya face in-dirty-water, cuz ya nasty flow i'll leave u murked-mate
plus the only thing mentaly "ill" about u, is that u stoled rhyme from the 3ed-grade
2/10
i could read ya shit "Fifty" times, N it still wouldnt "Make-Sence"
I Quake-Menz, the closest this cat got to "underground" was freestyling in hes basement
1/10

ya punches were weak ya wordplay wasent there and ya structure wasent that good but it was bout the best thing u had goin for you on this drop. You could really use some elevation before u answer 2 another battle




Intensify Effect?..thats how u getting murcked by this oustanding VET..and I’m doing this with no REGRETS (1)
3.10
son take this Spit as a 1000 holes in ya CHEST + bloods all over ur VEST,next time think twice b4 ge’in on the NET... (2)
2/10
723 POSTS..no change..you still a JOKE,you'r lines remind me of a gay in a BLOW..you would be "booed" at if this was a SHOW (3)
4/10
you aint in no CREW..nigga get a fucking CLUE..u suck and u SCREWED.cant u find somethingelse to DO? (4)
2/10
(he aint in no crew and in his profile he didn’t put whats he does..no work …nothing)

you puches r just like and old man MOUTH...how u xpeact to hurt me when u aint even got a teeth to brag ABOUT? (5)
3.10
he dosend even know wherre the fuck he FROM...you battleing me is like putting a pole up ya tinny bum BUM..(6)
2/10
(in his profile he didn’t put where he from)

8lines and im leaving peeps asking your wherre about...y'all gatta know he's right herre in the cats mouth.. (7)
2/10

i done with BUSTING YOU..next time i bitch slap think twice 'cos i'd keep CRUSHING YOU..now lets see if this spit aint worth saying "I’M SONING YOU"?
3/10

ya punches were all kinda played and simple and ya structure loses u points u need 2 even them out more try
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not 2 stretched and not 2 short and um u can use some better vocab in wording your set up and then your punch

it wasent the best from u but u get the win cuz your comp dropped more horrible


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Yvonne 09-17-04 02:51 PM

^^wdf the damn vote was well xplained.......duh


uppin this shit then its been open for like a month..........vote vote vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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