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uppin for votes here
i got this one here........ |
Voted For: ILLegitimate
Mj green was all talk and nothing really good i think the ill boy goot this shit even though it was shorter Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ok i've learnt my lesson, i'ma spit much shorter from now on
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Voted For: MjGrEeN
Tight Battle..... The Wordplay Was Nice In Both Verses.. MJGREEN Had More Humour An Better Punches... ILLegitimate Ended His Verse Nicely n Propps Goes Too Him... But ILL You Should ELEVATE Next Time...Go Harder n More Personal n Add Humour... Its All About Wordplay n Makin People Take Note...An Until The End ILL You Didnt Really Make Me Take Note... Where As MJGREEN Had Nice Wordplay n Dropped Lines That Made Me Take The Time Out n Appreciate... Nice Battle, Keep Up The Good Work My Nigguhz My Vote Goes Too MGREEN Tho.. Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles Ya'll P E A C E ! |
Voted For: MjGrEeN
MjGrEeN took this one...(even tho his shit was longr) he had harder punches..tha flow was pretty good..tha structure was in place and not strecthed out..and tha vocab was pretty decent (Easy To Read)... |
Voted For: MjGrEeN
ima go wit mj on dis 1 rha verse was longer n the rhymes were hot he had sum good punchlines in there 2, he needs jus a lil more flow tho but he def got dis vote=mjgreen |
Uppin 4 Votes.....................................
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Voted For: ILLegitimate
yo i vote this nigga mayn he had more diss it then tha other nigga that other nigga was ight but i like this nigga better |
Voted For: ILLegitimate
Yo i'ma ignite the fire cuz i'm a livewire, i'm high but i got the desire to get higher, Yo -name here-<--wtf...if you are gonna prewrite and or bite at least dont make it this obvious...you lose you know my shit is tight, dont start a fight because i'm white, i think i'ma just spit this shit in spite, Dude your not even in my league so remove yourself from my way, try to fuck with me your in the wrong direction, and your going the wrong way, In my last rap battle i lost inspiration, but in this one you'll get murked so bad you'll be on permanent vacation, I'ma cut you so bad you'll need an operation, your girl gets wet cuz of my sexual sensation, you cant win because i have the whole MJ nation and i got my dick planted in your girls plantation. v/ill for not pulling that stupid shit |
Voted For: ILLegitimate
ill took this...he had betta punches...betta flow...betta structure...betta wordplay...betta everythang... mj...wusnt feelin yo verse as much...it was akward in parts and didnt really flow...but thats just my opinion... v/ ill |
Voted For: ILLegitimate
vote/ILL punches: ILL(that verb line was sick) flow: ILL once again (didnt lose pace) strcuture: yet another for ILL(Green's was streched) wordplay: surprise! ILL: used it alot ps:don't make battles unlimited anymore that makes one person have alot less lines ~1~ |
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