well, this was really close. both of you came pretty good. I dont really have time so i'll cut to the chase.. in a pretty close battle, i think Forsaken won. he has some nice shiut. good job both of u. hit this up
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Voted For: For$akeN

decree it was aight some lines seemed like fillers n was'nt feeling the goat line to much got kinda confusing ta tell ya the truth but the rest flowed fairly well....4saken nice personals n some punches were connecting well..pretty creative verse good flow nice structure n a overall more solid verse in my opinion...nice battle both did well.....

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Voted For: For$akeN

decree-fucked up flow, structure was off. punches were basically blah, nothing special really. never say your verse sux cuz that just makes it look worse. decent try tho. oh yeah, never admit a loss....6/10

For$aken-good flo and structure. nice personals and punches just basically slaughtered this time around. maybe step up on metas a lil bit but nothing else needs work really....8.5/10

v//for$aken

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oooooo o nice oooooooooo hahaha just tryin to see who oted lol

^ummmm......ok fam! thanks for the up for no apparent reason:)^

Voted For: For$akeN

A'ight...this was a very tite battle...

Decree...you had some nice punches...some of ya lines I wanst feelin tho...some, ta me, seemed to be more filler than anythin. Nice structure, had that one personal...nice flow...not ya best shit, but still nice...

7.5/10

For$aken...nice structure and flow...easier to read than Decree's...you had some fuckin' ill personals...ya punches was tite...some hot shit.

9/10

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Voted For: For$akeN

forsaken- that opener LMAO damn cant believe that shit good punch but the rest of ya verse was average to me not much complexity or anything mostly straight to the point punchs but maintained a bunch of personals i think most of the lines were personals work on some creativitie with ya punchs help make people remeber ya shit but overall lil above average cause of all the personals

decree wun-not really fealin ya shit here brah dont put past loses in ya battles that goat line that was sick fealin the wordplay in that shit the main frame shit coulda been nice but didnt like the end of it had personals this time though but didnt like how most of ya lines was worded in this battle

vote forsaken

Voted For: For$akeN

For$akeN gets my vote...tha punches were hard & landed...tha structure was in place and not strect'd~out..tha flow as pretty good..and tha vocab was good too...
Decree Wun..yo shit was good punches could've been a little harder..and tha flow & structure was good..