yo ill shit, what made it dope was that it was real and you could definitely feel that in your lyrics. dopeness, cept my name should have been in there. lol

lol....

thnx for the feed back Van... lol... I won't ever get used to your new name...lol

yo...shit was good...keep it up...as for a diss its there...but more about other shit to me...n e how...8/10

thanks pay day... u & drastic tore it up too...

Niiiiiiice Village, Real Nice.....Got Anythin Else U Wrote Like That???

Blaaaaah, I Could Beat Some Of Your List...
Lolol, But Im Not About To Complain Here...
Real Nice Piece Mayn, Can See You Were Going For Emotion...
But I Have Just A Few Suggestions...
You Were Tryna Be Deep Then Said Something About Getting Back To Your Hoes...
That Kinda Kills The Moment Of Sorrow And Shit...
Cuz Then You Just Look Like Another Ganstah Wannabe Pimp Type Deal...
But Ya Mayn, Overall Real Nice...
Pretty Tite Flow, Would Sound Nice On Audio...
9.3/10...
.One.

lol... abstrakt... I was tired as fuck I'll wind up revising it before I do the audio...

thx

i think you have some buddie's here.

because you were doing one sylable rhymin . . which is not impressive for example
real-rap
more-crack
shit & it?
vet & reckless?

this is not anything close to being the dopest piece.

i'll leave feedback when i'm not too tired
Can someone break this down in .. motion . . wordplay . multi's flow.. vocab..?
6.4/10. average . . please leave feed back not " this was hot , yo "
it's getting on my nerve's.

lol... nah...

I know it's not impressive... I'm not trying to impress anyone... I don't need to... my thing Is I want people to get my message... thats just how it came out of my head and on to the keyboard.

I wasn't on the list. :cussing: :D :hump:

there's a point to that... spul... hold on... yes you were!

ill shit.... otflmsao

it was tite as hell

thats good money yo im feeling it good lookin out yung 1 peace

thanks for the feedback... keep it comin'.

Aight Man, I'm Here, Check My Battles That Are Currently Open Vs. World Famous & Tha Flash n Get Back To Me