RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Textual Releases (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=5)
-   -   Yvonne's first Open Mic..check it (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=145738)

Implicit 09-25-04 02:00 PM

ok ok. i liked this piece u did. it was deep, and i could definitely see where u were coming from. i started gettin mad with u. ha ha. but yeah good overall piece. thats definitely a 8.5 or a 9. keep doing ur ting and keep reppin N.O.K

Detrimental 09-25-04 06:20 PM

i liked this.....it was tight.....it was deep....i tend to listen to beats of songs and write whatever comes to mind.....but yea......this was tight.....i liked everything besides
"cos im black and i can fight,and u wack cos u white...thats right"

that's fucked up.....it aint true all black people can beat up white people just cuz they black......i know a lot of black people that i could beat the fuck out of.....color don't mean shit.....i give this like an 8.5......would've been a 9 but to me.....racist sounding lines take off your rating.....no hate.....tight shit tho.....give me some feedback on my song: I Pray


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:49 PM.