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50Cal. 08-29-04 11:29 PM

^he only voted for you cuz i voted aganist him homo shit but who cares thats what homos do---BLACKLISTED

Percept Shun 08-30-04 05:21 PM

Blah, Good Info on votes, Upping...

RymheReaper 08-30-04 05:24 PM

Voted For: Empire

Sry vokals but empire took it his punches were hot flaming urs was decent his flow metas shit hot all over

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Klassic 08-30-04 05:41 PM

This was feedback posted for Tachyonic VoKals
 
wait wut w/e i aint votin im just checkin the score on this battle

Abraxas 08-30-04 05:57 PM

This was feedback posted for Tachyonic VoKals
 
juss checkin

50Cal. 08-30-04 11:48 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppin

50Cal. 08-31-04 02:56 AM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppin

M&rk 08-31-04 03:04 AM

Voted For: Tachyonic VoKals

since both ya'll's verses sucked, and neither of ya'll had a single punch that hit at all im votin for this cat who didn't have explinations almost as long as his verse.

return the vote with a better explanation than me on my emergingmc battle. please......... one

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M&rk 08-31-04 03:10 AM

tach, u said alot of shit that weren't punches like........

cause his rhymes are overdue.

having over due w/e aint a punch, but ya dont battle people in BAM, they're all a bunch of dickriding fagets.... as u can see from my battle if u checkit out.

DV8 08-31-04 03:25 AM

Voted For: Empire

I could tell this guy’s pussy and weak, gave up on his OWN crew.
It’s like forgetting to return books, cause his rhymes are overdue.
^^ok setup..week punch n ok personal...5/10
This kid must be a big joke, he'll die when he's smoked like coke.
Guy’s probably just breaking his bread, except he’s “bar broke.”
ok....6.5/10
This is like a game, but I bet he still couldn't get a play on words.
He needs to balance all his fucking “lines”... like telemarketers.
good...7/10
Thought this kid was hard, but only cause he’s lines are stone aged.
Old as fuck, thought he was made a vet, but bitch was never made.
^^6/10
Bet this kids gonna be rushing out of the battle, like classes dismissing.
Kid’s like failing planes, brings the fact his punches are always “missing.”
^^ok...but was a weak finisher...6/10
overall 30.5/50



My 'verbs' 'X'out 'herbs' like 'Belly' fan of 'Nelly' look at his 'handle'
Either dont know rap or you 'gay' either 'way'they should 'ban you'(1)
^^bad rhyme..good personal..6/10
No 'way' this like 'N.B.A' and you no more then a 'munchkin'
You get 'left sun' think ya 'percept shun' is in need of 'adjustment'(2)
^^was'nt feelin it...5/10
'Grammer' say you clap 'hammers' rock 'bandanaas' and 'bag whores'
But you never held a 'mag' yous a 'fag' and thats why ya pants 'sag for'(3)
^^ok 6/10
Never 'scuffled' most 'trouble' you seen was 'shop lifting'
Still 'waiting' ya 'elevation' like trash weed its 'not lifting'
^^good..7/10
FINISHER-
13 cant 'drive' cant 'survive' without ya mommy to 'run you'
So 'fuck words' im gonna 'fuck her' be ya daddy then 'son you'(4)
^^ok personal....6.5/10

overall 30.5/50

aight this was a weak battle in my opinion both tied on punches n shit but with flow n structure left there the deciding factors...which are simular,im gonna go with empire he had better thought out punches....

-..Jono..- 08-31-04 06:55 PM

Voted For: Tachyonic VoKals

Ight...

Tach i was feelin the flo..you didnt have to take it to a different level of structure, you hit punches n a scheme which flowed tight it was dope..

Metas,Flo,Punches: Tach
Structure, personals: Empire

Vote: Tach

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Replay 08-31-04 08:18 PM

Voted For: Tachyonic VoKals

Vokals:
i like the flow it was nice and easy.
nice personnals and punches
nice opener clor was ok
complexity was good not to much and not to little

Empire:
didn't like the space after the bars of the #'s
didn't get the punches
no opener closer was ok

Vokals won

50Cal. 08-31-04 11:08 PM

^didnt get the punches? :huh: stupid read the explanations then fucking homo anyways uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin

Kawn Flixx 08-31-04 11:20 PM

Voted For: Empire

hmmmm pretty decent battle

T.V.:
nice opener-flow was good and sturc. too
but alotta your punches een used over and over
............and over and over.....again
so it gave me alotta flashbacks and it ruined your verse :(

Empire:

ok good flow this time-punches were original
except for the last line- it wsa bout his momma
and his age so it been played-
but you only had one and he had alot
so you win with punches

vote/Empire

Tycoon 09-01-04 12:45 AM

Voted For: Empire

opener-empire
structure-empire
punches-vokals
metas-vokals
overal flow- empire
closer-empire

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