Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

you punches miss,so how are you winning when you got ripped by -Explicits'-two-line-diss
Don't get smart-kid! have you wrapped up and-tarnished,got asthma? Dawg i'll leave you gaspin regardless..

lol...i liked that line..but anyway my vote goes to Arch...(to me tho) i think his punches were a slight harder den Trooper's...tha structure was a little stretched out...tha flow was pretty decent and wordplay was nice...

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That shit aint explained lol
dont even count dude

This was feedback posted for † ArchAngel †
 

checkin out the battle and the poll
both of you did well

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

Archangel- your verse was nice...i enjoyed it...your punches were nice too...some hit hard but not many but mostly your punches were nice...your structure was aight could have done better with it...your metas had some good ones...overall you got this battle with better punches and a better verse...

Trooper- your verse was also nice...but i liked archangel's more...your punches were also good to but some just werent hard enough...your structure was very very nice...you had some metas...had a few personals...but overall it was close but archangel got this...

v/ArchAngel

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

Yo.. You both chill with me.. Dont get pissed if i vote against you..

Trooper
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was dope.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Arch Angel
structure is ok.. ur lines r stretched though.. flow falls off a little due to the stretchness.. good multis.. wordplay is tight.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personal..

Overall
Trooper had the better structure.. as well as the better flow.. both had dope wordplay.. Arch Angel had more multis.. more connecting punches.. and the better personal.. so basing off of that.. Arch Angel gets my vote..

VOTE - ARCH ANGEL

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig.. thanx..

upp this shyt man

finally no d/ring votes...lets go

for trooper
 

ay yo...this was a sick battle...wish i could vote...trooper u came good...u had punches, personals, multies, and all dat shit...haha...arch...urs was good to G...just troops was a lil harder to me...u had some good hits, BUT, u dropped off the flow in the begining...thats how you lost it...i am really suprised its 2-2...it whould be 4-0 troop...but thats my opinion...good look both of you...~1~


STR8 :shoot:

Vote: Trooper
 

Trooper: had flawless structure, good personals an example of that is the first bar, nice wordplay, good punches, and had good metaphors

Archangel: structure fell off after a while, nice wordplay, good metaphors and multi's, good punches, streched ya lines out

the flow of archangel thru me off, both of u are good as shit but my vote goes to trooper

Uppin

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

ok good battle

let me break it down....
punches
are counted in four catigories:
1.complesxity:AA
2.wordplay: AA
3. impact:AA
4.originality:AA

structure:AA (troops was choppy)

"Recognized your Ignorance i'll Dismember ya "Wing" like a Reaper
Not Significant" your Style doesnt sell like a Patrick Ewing Sneaker"

i swear on everything i love
that you bit this line from somewhere...
i heared it from schema or somebody.....

anyway bit or not AA wins

no hate jus my oppinion

:)


i'm out
~1~

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Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

ima have to give this one to you...i think you won becuz of ya punches...dont get me wrong..Troops punches were good too...but yours were more unique...ya vocab and wordplay was overall good as well...a couple of ya lines was stretched ..so work on that...ya opener coulda been betta..but ya closer was good..

Trooper..ya verse was ok too but the punchlines didnt hit like archs did...his shit seemed more unique..it seemed like yours was main street punches relating things to famous peeps...i just think that you lacked the wordplay and punches that arch had...but still good battle

Lol dr votes
them shitz dont count


we'll see if strobe take em off or not

cuz kno damn well i aint lose this damn battle

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

alright this was a good battle... arch angel came pretty hard with punches..i have seen drop better verses.. trooper ur verse was aiight his punches was aight some kinda played.. like that clark kent line i saw stuff like that before.. structure and flow u both kinda came even on that... so overall this was a real close battle but i say arch cause his punches were better

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

damn everyone is going against trooper any more lol

arch has some mad funny shit and it was allnice except for the flow it was a little off. mults<alot and that good. complex rhymes were tight everything hit and it was a mad close battle. best line was: man you gettin crunched-and-then-soiled, How ya verse gonna mix when ya flow is vinegar and ya punches are oil?..
evident you can't elevate cuz all your spits are wack, cuz like "midgets" you can talk shit, but can't "say shit to my face!"...
i got it idk if anyone else did

troop nice flow but not to good in any thing else. good opener good closer. good vocab, and good mults but not feeling the ""'s. best line: Stop the Speculations~Your Not in Nomination 2 run 4 Domination
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